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SleepyBear


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Killua dies in the dark continent....or at least that is what he thought

New world

New rules

New body


Looking for an editor for this Fic. hehe

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 78 )

9239990
Damn you are right , thanks

Fixed

9239994
Don't feel right faving this though, haven't watched hunterxhunter and can only name 3 characters because of watch mojo and anime america I think

9239999
I recommend watching , Is really good . Still you won’t need to know the hunterxhunter universe to understand the fic .

9240001
Good start, killua and grey think a bit like me, you have my like on this too.

Is it wrong that when I saw the title I thought monster hunter first

9240180
A that is also a good hunter

I wonder who he will kill first in this story

>Killua in equestria
Oh fuck yes

the way you've written this chapter it's definitely how i'd expect Killua to react to being thrown into a stange new world with a body to match.

9240955
Thanks, I was trying to be as accurate as possible :rainbowdetermined2:

9241183
I can't wait to see who you'll have from Ponyvill adopt Killua or Ace. Also I think Killua should of chosen a electricity based name for two reasons first being his emitter power and second being he's a Pegasus.

9241252
yeah I was between two names, but with the information, Killua had he only created a name based on his color ( cause Grey and Lime Green are gray and green)

Wait... Who is Killua, and where is he from?

9241571
HunterXHunter the anime , I highly recommend it is one of the best animes out there

"Partylust"

This makes way too much sense the more you think about it.

why is the pacing of this story so fast?

9241905
Well the first 5 episodes will be like some kind of prelude , after that the story pace will be slower

Interesting story so far. Really hope we get to see some Godspeed from him. Maybe have him show up Rainbow Dash in a race maybe? That would most certainly be a sight to see :rainbowlaugh:

9241978
Hahaha yeah , Killua will have to adapt his NEN so it works in the body of a pony , but he will definitely race Rainbow dash

9241981
I'm definitely going to be looking forward to that.

9241997
Rainbow will be like “NANI” :rainbowderp:

9242002
Just have him sitting at the finish line eating a muffin :ajsmug:

9242015
Okay so how much longer are we going to have Killua mind fuck RD.

Comment posted by Corascal deleted Oct 20th, 2018
Comment posted by SleepyBear deleted Oct 20th, 2018

Fuck ya diamond bitch got what she deserved

9243340
I Actually finishing part 2 of this chapter so in about 3 hours I'll post another chapter


I'm glad you liked it

I'm liking the story so far, I suggest being more mindful of your comas and full stops tho, they seem to be in short supply.

9243395
Hahaha yeah sorry about that my grammar can be awful sometimes, trying to improve every chapter though.

looking for an editor at the moment to help me correct those mistakes hopefully I'll find one soon :twistnerd:

9243399
Good to know, I assume you've been searching in the groups on this site dedicated to editing and proofreading.

9243406
I don't expect you'll be waiting long then, in my experience you usually find someone willing within a week.

The following paragraph makes little no sence might want to think of fixing it up.

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9243876
It should be better now , let me know if you find anything else

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