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Blue Horizon


Sunset Shimmer is best human, pony, princess, and siren. Cleveland Browns, Cleveland Cavaliers, and Columbus Blue Jackets fan. Manga connoisseur and aficionado. Plot creator and wannabe writer.

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Sunset Shimmer's plans of revenge against the Princess had everything going right, up until she came back through the portal. She thought the biggest problem would be the crown being given to Celestia. Instead, she does the right thing, to the shock of everyone, and is now dead. But her uncharacteristic sacrifice and unique origins has created an opportunity for the Spirit Realm. Under the employment of Botan, a grim reaper, and Koenma, the heir to the Spirit Realm, Sunset is unknowingly given one last chance to earn the crown and wings that she so desperately coveted once before.


Author's note:

Hey everypony, just wanted to thank you all for checking this out ahead of time. I loved watching and reading Yu Yu Hakusho as a kid. For the last year+ I've had this thought lodged in my head that kept pushing Sunset as an incredible Spirit Detective. Out of all the unpublished stuff I started, this was one few crossover ideas that I'm surprised has never been replicated by someone else... so a few of my friends finally convinced me to polish it up and publish. So, here it is!

It takes place in the mid/late 2010s and not in the 1990s. Additionally, no Yusuke, Keiko, and Kuwabara... the rest? Well, you'll just have to wait and see!

Character tags will be updated as the characters are added into the published stuff.

Enjoy!


I want to thank BronyOverlord and Michael Ravencroft for helping me fix my mistakes. I also want to thank this silly bozo for continually pestering me until I finally hit submit on something, along with this guy for doing something similar! All four of them are immensely great at what they do, and without them, I never would have pushed that 'submit' button. So go check them out!

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Comments ( 112 )

Can't say I'm familiar with the source material.

But the story held my interest and Botan is awesome.

I'll keep an eye for this, feels like it could be fun.

Comment posted by red-sun deleted Jan 1st, 2020

Sunset in Yusuke's place? Well now, never really thought I'd see this idea put to screen, as it were. You've recreated the first episode fairly well, now to see where you take it from there.

Neat!
This looks interesting!

Please let Botan get some good zingers in on Sunset. Now we know who will be training her I hope they all knock her down several pegs. Then again I think Spirit World knows a bit more about Equestria then Botan is letting on.

._____. ......... *Slowly moves the cursor to select "Tracking"* ...this will be good.

firstly you got my curiosity, now you got my attention. I have to say, the idea of having a yuyu hakusho version of EG, was a great idea, and I know you can have great ideas about how to use it. While I still preffer the Portuguese version of the anime, cause the voice actors were perfect. Anyway, I hope you can maybe add Yusuke Urameshi or not, depends on how you are going to use her. LOL

This story had better not die like all the other Yu Yu Hakusho crossovers on this site.

So, Twilight saw Sunset do a selfless deed grabbed her crown and headed back home to tell Celestia that Sunset is dead?

That's going to be fun if and when Sunset goes back home after her revival. Now I wonder if Philomena is going to come through the mirror looking for Sunset, or if she is simply getting her own Pu, despite the info about Sunset hatching a phoenix

Well now, we don't see nearly enough Yu Yu Hakusho these days. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Now I wonder who's going to fill Hiei and Kurama's roles.

Ooooh! This looks promising! Can't wait to see more! :pinkiehappy:

Not the biggest fan of YYH, but I'll admit there were a few neat things about it. Definitely keeping track of this one.

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If you ever get the chance, and have several hours to kill, I totally recommend giving Yu Yu Hakusho a try. The anime and manga both have different strengths and weaknesses, but I definitely would encourage you trying it out. The english dub is absolutely amazing too, FWIW as someone who only listens to Japanese Dubs, this is one of the few exceptions to watch in English.


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I'm curious to see which way too. I have several ideas but constantly flip back-and-forth between them. But, I wanted to at least keep the beginning as similar as I could. For... reasons.


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Thank you guys, I hope it/I/this/we(?) doesn't disappoint.


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I don't want to say too much, but Zingers will be made.


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Completely (somewhat) unrelated, but as I was reading this, it made me think of Philomena seeing Pu and deciding to use poor Pu as a pecking... thingy. And a perch.


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Honestly a little surprised there wasn't a big push on a YuYu fic, especially when the new OVAs released. It would seem to be in the release window for the age group of the fandom... same with Inuyasha too, yet, those are kinda nonexistent? I don't think I've even seen an actual Sailor Moon one either. I remember watching those as a kid in the early to mid 2000s, just surprised they kinda got ... forgotten it feels like.

It looks like you're taking the liberty of using characters from the show. Well if you decide to have some Equestria Girls characters to replace some of the human cast of Yu Yu Rainbow Dash would make for a great replacement for Kuwabarra. Well we're going to see Sunset's wake soon so let's see how the Mane 5 react then.

I love that anime and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and I want to see Twilight's side when this happened
I hope Philomena comes to mourn and becomes a happy bird when she wakes up

Oooh, I like this premise. Random fact: the mangaka of YYH and HxH is married to the lady who made Sailor Moon.

This is par for the course in YYH. So far, Sunset makes Yusuke seem tame with how often she swears- even worse that she’s part of a race where spontaneous musicals are normal, solitude can be a fate worse than death and their curse words are actually tame compared to every other race in fiction.

looking forward to more, I love yu yu hakusho and Sunset. i can't wait to see who she gets as her teammates in the future.

its good nice work

Loving this so far, aren't allot of Yu Yu Hakusho crossover fics on here and certainly not many that actually finished. Hope to see more of this soon :twilightsmile: (P.S. Your enterpreation Botan is PERFECTION, it almost feels like I am watching an anime with her and Sunset... any fan animators out their get on that :scootangel:)

like the idea, and i get the feeling sunset is just like genkai, attitude for days.

You had my curiosity, now you have my attention.

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I'm eager to see what you settle on.

I also have to watch this in English whenever I watch it, mostly for one reason, Jin. The other voice actors really did well in that dub, but Jin's takes the cake for me.

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I'm definitely sticking to reading this. It's a good start to at least give us an idea on how things get started.

Love the premise since I have fond memories of Yu Yu Hakusho. Definitely liked that you're kinda just jumping into things.

Oh man, this really feels like YYH, and Sunset doing her thing has sooo much potential. Really enjoying it. Looking forward to whenever you write more!

Tracking this because of the Yu Yu Hakusho nostalgia. I'm certain that I'll love this one way or another.

Waiting a couple more of chapters before reading it...

Ah, Yu Yu Hakusho. I missed you, old friend.

She should be at home, in her Canterlot, sitting on a nice ivory throne with her cutiemark embroidered into her velvet cushions and a crown that matched her fiery mane and the Princess of Love eating out of her hoof.

You know, I'm genuinly suprised there aren't any (to my knowledge) Sunset/Cadance d/s fics out there.

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If I remember correctly, from the Manga, the anime actually dialed down Yusuke's behavior. Like, he actually smokes and drinks, and has a more vulgar tongue.


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OMG, SENPAI NOTICED ME! Thanks a ton, and I'll try not to let you down! You gave me good advice when I asked a few months back. I'll try to stick with them this year when I head back to where I'm living.


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That's fair, I track a lot of stories and wait for them to build up. I hope you enjoy it whenever you dive in.

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Cadence / Sunset is one of my favorite crack ships... but it is a step down from my favorite ship... Queen Chrysalis and Sunset Shimmer! I have that entire plot written, and I've always loved it. If I ever find the time to build confidence in true horse words, I may even write it.

I'm curious if we can see who will be part of the Kwabara part, it will be Kwabara himself or it will be Rarity or Rainbow Dash who was bullied by Sunset Shimmer? I'm curious while I love Yu Yu Hakusho and totally recommend to everyone to watch the anime, especially in more than just one language, because it seems it is the only anime which can be perfect dub by any voice actors.

And I can't wait to see if Hiey will be shipped with Sunset Shimmer, or Sunset Shimmer bully Lord Koema many times LOL

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I did not realize how much I needed a Yu Yu Hakusho fanfic until I came across this. :trollestia:

Can't wait to see how Kuwabara reacts to her. :twilightoops:

I just started rewatching the anime a few days ago. Must be fate, haha. I'll definitely check this out

10015523 Oh yeah. I read the manga- it’s slightly longer than the anime.

Since nobody's seemed to have done this yet, I suppose it falls to me. Enjoy!

I'm just cracking up at the thought of Sunset saying "EARTH TO TODDLER BITCH!"

Hmmm... intriguing. You got my attention. I only hope the real chapters will not be this short.

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*hmms* Sooooo... King Sombra is the younger Toguro? And Chrysalis is the older one? I mean, he's the one who sucked up a ton of Dark Magic and became a demon, and she's the psychotic shape-shifter.

It kinda works... :rainbowhuh:

10015765 At first you had my curiosity.... but now you have my erection.

(Don't you mean-)

YOU KNOW WHAT I'M ABOUT!!!

(DBZ:A should be the canon material... it's just too good.)

"Well," she rubbed the back of her head, "you're not one who takes bad news very well but... Sweetie Belle wasn't actually going to get run over. She was going to trip over the roll of silk she dropped and actually go completely under the bus. She'd have a few scrapes on her legs, arms and face, but that's about it. So, like you just said, your death was totally pointless!

So you can either go to the afterlife or be reborn in a sword and sorcery land where you'll have to defeat the Devil King! And get almost eaten by giant frogs a few times... and deal with a seriously masochistic female knight. Then there's your mage... she's SERIOUSLY into explosives.

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10015528 Maybe one of the Pegasus bullies?

Kurama would be Rose? Cuz red hair?

Hiei would be, uhm… stuck up pony with black hair... drawing a blank there.

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Hiei? Aria, of course, Aria, she doesn't need to have black hair, but her character fits with his personality.

I think Kwabara must be Rainbow Dash. And Rose be Kurama, but I don't think she had the same dramatic circumstances as Kurama, I think Kurama must posses Rose and he is now she. That's my opinion.

I think Toguro shouldn't be represented by another character than himself, he is the best tragic villain and must be saved from himself, like Sunset find a way to do that.

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I don't think so... It seems the old Genkai it's still her, so I think Toguro will be him as well, because Genkai wouldn't lose to someone unless if was important to her.

10026830 Well, we don't know what Rose is like in this world. She could be a demon in disguise the whole time.

10026868 Could do a version of the comic Sombra here. The more tragic take on him, where he sold his soul basically for Dark Magic to become the most powerful class of demon.

Same with Chrysalis, could have once been a 'pony' (human in this case) who made a similar deal for power. Discord could be Sakyo who masterminds the tournament and was conspiring with Toguro.

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