I am here to prove that even someone that has dyslexia can write stories. All feedback is appreciateā, and always have a smile.
Sunburst has always been a good pony. Helping out others in need. So what happens when he opens a mystery box in front of his door that has somepony asking for help? He gets caught in a web of disaster by an Enemy of the lands. And has to unite with an unexpected ally to defeat them.
As a side story set right after "Our New Queen"
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Oh.. not good.
Ah, I see Sunburst found that box Maleficent and Pete were looking for. Hope the Org doesn't come looking for it.
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I am getting a feeling that this is something to do with kingdom heart. But then again I never finished their games. And I don't know much about K.H.3.
Well this was an amusing chapter.
well, that escalated...
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Yep.
The ending amused me enough for me to smile.
I like this.
Still.
Surprising!
Well things got out of hand.
I was a little surprised at first to see a changeling Twilight but I remember seeing it in a different fanfic...
However this is really good :) keep it up buddy!
Ooooooooh, drama and traumatic backstory.
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Indeed.
Papa Wolf Mode: activated.
Well, this was a fun read, I tough that the basis premise is very interesting and your approach of telling the story isn't bad either with the humor you are trying to use. The only ting that I feel that is holding back in really getting into another wise good story would be the us of emotional descriptions of the action or hyperbolic expressions but you are not fall off of actually reaching this stage. So I wish you good luck in your writing then.
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Thank you. I had a feeling something was missing.
Oooh. Plot twist ish.
Nice.
This was a good story.
Glorious, Touching, Terrific, Magnifique...
a truly supersizing story and a grate read.
daw a perfect ending. to a grate story
compared to the stone ending of the show.
Saw cute š„°