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Cackling Moron


"Fluff" in the same way what collects under the sofa is fluff.

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The local human is not especially happy being stranded where he is, finding the natives too brightly coloured and too friendly and all-in-all a little daunting. He is rarely seen outside the house on the edge of town. They give him space.

One very early morning an especially loud, house-rattling sounds draws him outside though, and rather makes his day.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 8 )

It was highly like that not one hoof had set foot - uh, hoof?

Likely?

And you do need a slash anyway.

I assume that's meant to be wash.

Loved the story, short and sweet :)

Well that's just plain wholesome.

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Slash means pee. The other one is a legit typo.
And glad it's sweet!

You know, I generally avoid 2nd-person fics, as I an quite mad and having someone put thoughts in my head is, uncomfortable. But I very much enjoyed this. Not least because this is pretty much what I actually would have done, from start to finish. But even more than that, it was a good, kind, peaceful story. A friendship begun, and nothing more. Too many writers on this site insist on being Candace, the Pretty Pink Princess of Shipping EVERYONE!!!

Might we, perhaps, see more of this? Derpy is one of my favorite characters, not because of the memes, but because she's such a lovely person (pony?).

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Huh, you learn something new every day.

Lovely, I would like to see more of this. But it's alright if it's just a one shot.

returning the basket would be a good excuse to visit her.

but this was adorable.

Super adorable. Derpy is best pony of course.

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