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Uh... What? The prequel is a 'canceled' story?
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This story isn't a continuation of the last story. It's the spiritual successor of the previous story.
OK this I like, great first chapter. I can't wait for more
You did a really good job on this.
9340411 Thank you. I worked quite hard on it!
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Exactly. I have a good few plans for this one~
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It shows
References I noticed even if only by the names: Astral Clock (Bloodborne), Old poison (Demon Souls), Burning World and Dead World (Fallout and Dark Souls), Remnants (Fallout), The Dead Ones (Dark Souls Hollows), and the Mirror makes me think of the story Mirror of Souls.
Don't know what the Sixteen Ancients or Song of Reclaiming are referencing.
9340875 Some of the references you got right, others wrong, but the big hint and the main reference you are still missing. Keep trying, though, you're doing good.
That’s what you call a rough start.
9345624 Indeed.
I like this set up for this story, it actually reminds me of how I used to believe a realist undead from darksouls would think.
By the way which darksouls are you going to pull from?
9346524 Quite literally all of them. I will pull a good few references, but there will also be some beings that I feel should have gotten more focus in the fandom, AND some characters that aren't in the lore but are from places in the different countries and continents of the Dark Souls universe.
Oh, also, if you or anyone feels like it, I have a patreon going on now, as well as a stream for Dark Souls: Remastered.
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I look forward to more.
I’m gonna keep an ion this one
9351448 I look forward to entertaining you with this tale.
9346642 Well, here's more.
Onyx blade, one of my favorite weapons.
9372166 Mine as well. Honestly though I still feel the description was a little too on the nose...
How has he not lost his mind from all those deaths?
9372426 Memories of his past life which will be shown in the following chapters. This chapter they were only hinted at.
Ledo's Great Hammer would be good too, or the Black Knight Great Axe
What about the 'rifle' he had in Chapter 1?
Why didn't he use it on the Deathclaws?
What type is it, Assault, Combat, or Hunting?
I prefer a Combat Rifle(semi) with a medium scope and a large mag. Keeps a safe distance.
Suppressed10mm with a long barrel, reflex sight and a large mag. Stealth kils at decent range.
With Rifleman and Gunslinger this seems like the most versatile build that works for me.
9376134 You'll see it next chapter, don't worry. As for why he didn't use it, well, he did, but it was during one of the times he died. One thing to remember is that Deathclaws are resistant to bullets. I mean, in the games, over a hundred shots with an un-upgraded minigun won't kill even one, so I'd say that's pretty telling to how tough their hides are.
Still, your point rings true, so I'll see about adding in how he used it in this chapter.
EDIT: There, added a little more to it.
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Thank you.
9378158 Of course, dear reader.
Query: That would be known as 'awkward' correct?
The exchange, you mean? Or the chapter?
Heyo, everyone! So, I finally noticed that the previous line dividers stopped working, and have finally fixed it by replacing them with the site's default dividers. Sorry to all of you whom were inconvenienced!
Ah yes, Flurry Heart, known for her unceasing swearing, she doesn't even know any word that isn't a swear even.
(If you can't tell, I'm joking here based off of what I see in the info panels. I have not read the actual contents of the story as of yet. Please don't lynch me.)
10141610 'Tis fine, and rather humorous, so worry not.
I would be more incline to swear more like the salty sailor for how unfair that was, But this one has a better heart then me XD