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Voyage of the Equinox - Starscribe



Equestria's first interstellar ship is crewed by the best and brightest Equestria has to offer. Twilight Sparkle and her friends are determined to uncover the origin of the mysterious alien Signal, no matter what it costs. A comment-driven story.

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Chapter 45

Remain in orbit to treat Applejack and interrogate Node 50%

Twilight didn’t let herself relax until the engines finally cooled again and all the screens in front of her were glowing green. She checked the orbital projection, waited a few seconds for the computer to return confirmation that their trajectory was stable, then spun her chair around.

“Guess you… had an adventure down there,” Fluttershy muttered, her eyes never leaving Node. For the first time since Twilight had met her, the doctor was wearing a handgun on her belt, as well as the usual suspects of medical tools. “Do you think it was safe to bring that thing back with you?”

“Safe?” She shrugged. “They’re the entire point of this mission, aren’t they? First contact. So far it’s been us doing what they want.” She lowered her voice to a whisper. “Check on Applejack. I’m going to ask our new friend some questions. And I’m going to get answers.”

Fluttershy gulped, then hurried away.

“Pinkie,” Twilight asked, gently nudging her with one hoof. The Earth Pony was no longer catatonic—she was sitting against a wall, looking ashamed. “Hey, Pinkie.”

“I’m S-sorry,” she whimpered, tears trickling down her muzzle. “I should’ve… I know exactly how to.”

Twilight’s wings were trapped in her stupid plastic suit, but she could set one hoof on her shoulder. “Pinkie, relax. We made it out, that’s what counts. I have something I need you to do.”

“You can’t trust me to do anything,” she answered, hiding her head in her forelegs. “Just… give it to somepony else.”

“Everypony is busy,” Twilight said. “I need you to call Spike and check on the repair. Make sure he’s safe, make sure he’s sane. Have him check on the prisoner specifically. I want you to tell him that the computer isn’t good enough, he needs to visually confirm her casket is occupied. You can do that, Pinkie.”

The pony looked like she might argue—but then she snapped back to her hooves, and saluted weakly with one hoof. “Of course, captain. Right away.”

Twilight left her to her work—that job at least would be simple enough that even an unstable pony couldn’t mess it up somehow. In the meantime, Twilight headed straight to where Node was resting. It hadn’t chosen a random patch of wall-that was the largest voltage outlet on the ship, to be used for power tools if they had serious internal repairs to make, or needed an emergency air purifier.

Twilight stopped in front of Node, settling down onto her haunches. “Node,” she said, glowering. “We did what you wanted. We got you a body, and my ship was almost destroyed in the process. We almost died getting off the planet, from a danger you didn’t warn us about.”

There was no head to move, no eyes to track her. The cameras on its torso seemed to be watching, but they always did. So far as she could tell, they never moved.

“Now it’s time for the exchange. You’re going to answer my questions.” She waited a few seconds—expecting either nothing to happen, or for the machine to make some kind of excuse.

“I have… information. More than you. But not everything can be… processed. Some information is indigestible. No context is present, no parsing mechanism. Your language… insufficient.”

“I don’t need you to give me the secrets of your technology,” she said. Not right now, anyway. “Something simpler. These questions you can answer with a few words, words I know you can use because you’ve used them already. First—is this your planet? Down there?”

“Yes.”

Okay, probably could’ve worded that better. “Originally, I mean. Did you evolve here?”

“Did not… evolve. Was designed. Others evolved, deep time. Not me.”

Me. Still, Node was answering her questions again. Maybe cooperating with it had finally earned them some goodwill! But how far could she push it? “Did your creators take this planet from another species?”

“No.” It answered quickly, like it had answered all her question. No one seemed to take longer than the last. No time spent thinking—no doubt. And I’m not sure how it has time to send these messages from the surface. Maybe it has some answers prerecorded? It was easy to imagine that, given it was talking with Starlight Glimmer’s prerecorded voice right now. “Empty. Not even… basic ecology. Creators were… sensitive. Did not wish to damage… potentially sentient animals of a later epoch. Nothing lived here.”

It was the answer she wanted. But can we trust it? Does Node understand us well enough to know that we wouldn’t want to work with conquerors?

“Some of you survived the destruction of this planet,” Twilight said. “Your parents?”

“No parents,” Node answered. “Created, not evolved. My creators… did not. Persistence was not.”

“Not here,” Twilight supplied. “What about on other worlds?” But even as she asked it, her eyes were fixed on the distant outline of the ring, visible from out the window.

“I hope so,” Node said. “Do not know. No messages—this was matter of safety. Message can be followed.”

Like we followed you. But safe from what? “Did you destroy your own planet?”

“Somewhat,” Node answered. “Yes/no/maybe. Impact of fleet unclear. I was not created yet.”

Not created. No parents. “When were you created?”

“2976 hours ago, when your starship was detected. Data compression, primitive storage medium. Limited information. Directives suggested shelter might contain data dump. Did not. You near the exhaustion of my records, as me. Must… assist. Survive. Creators do… wish you survive. Would have wished. Something.” The little screen on Node’s chest flashed once, then darkened. The machine didn’t respond to any further questions or promptings on Twilight’s part.

“Spike says all quiet,” Pinkie said. “No escapes. If she did, would probably die anyway. He still says at least a month before it’s safe for us, maybe longer.”

“Yeah,” Twilight grinned. “Great work!” She made her way to the cargo bay next, leaving the suit on in case she needed it.

She found Fluttershy sitting beside a pile of medical equipment spread out on a workstation, and the sound of snoring coming from inside the tent. Twilight approached the former, tapping Fluttershy gently on the shoulder. “Anything?”

The pegasus sat up with a start, eyes widening. “Oh! Uh… yes, actually. Applejack is infected with something. Viral, or quasi-viral. I’ll know more in 72 hours.”

“Buck.”

Twilight considered her orders, then…

1. Land and start growing. Get Applejack onto her hooves and working. She’s an Earth Pony, she’ll be fine.

2. Land and farm, without applejack. She’s done more than enough. Let the engineer get a little rest.

3. Remain in Orbit until we know about Applejack, if something goes critically wrong, it’s better to be close to the cryosleep caskets than further. If this gets out of control, we could freeze her for later treatment.

(Certainty 200 required)

Author's Note:

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What you’re reading is a CYOA-style adventure story, fully driven by its user feedback. This story is written using a system called Mythic, a GM-simulator that allows me to be fully in the driver’s seat for the prose, without actually knowing what will happen next. Success or failure in this story is fully governed by the fickle hand of fate, as well as the wisdom of those who chose to vote on it.

You can go ahead and vote in older polls if you want, but obviously they won’t retroactively change the text going forward, so the links are left behind mostly because I’m lazy and as a record of previous decisions.

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