Aegis. An ancient word that means parental love. When five foals get locked inside a mall at night, they discover that not all entities grant them such love. If they survive the tortures, they might find out what the absence of Aegis truly means.
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Thanks. But I have reached the point where I unfortunately have to admit that this story sucks. I still like the idea, but I have by now realized that I botchered the execution completely. It reads bland and unexciting and nothing really falls together here. It could be more, but it isn't, because I rushed the writing of it out of sheer excitement for the idea. I can finally see now why it has so little views and why so few care about it. And I only keep writing it until the end because I vowed to finish each story I've started.
I don't like to say that, but as an author who wants to get good with his writing, I need to hold myself to a strict standard, even if it means that I have to say for the first time that a story of mine genuinely sucks. One day I'll be making a better approach to this idea and write the story again.