Uh, hello, hello? If you are hearing this, then welcome to your new career as a nightguard at Freddy Fazbear’s Pizzeria. Now, you might have heard some strange rumors about Freddy and his friends, specifically how they kill the night guard. That, that is not entirely true. They are a bit quirky, but, hey, who can blame them? They must be bored out of their skulls. Well, not so much these days...
Remember, these characters hold a special place in the hearts of children, so please respect that. Just watch your doors and your cameras, and you should be able to get through the night.
Oh, and if you get a chance try to befriend Fluttershy. If she likes you, that will make your nights a lot better.
Or the misadventures of semi-murderous animatronics as they raise a kindhearted pegasus filly.
Inspired by Tatsurou's PWNY-verse.
Tags subject to change.
Dark tags because of FNaF's backstory.
First of all: YES! YES! TAKE ALL OF MY YES!!!
Secondly: You little rat! You got around to writing this story before I did! (jk lol)
Third: Just off the bat, the way the story is written is a bit hard to follow. Although don't get me wrong, the FnaF series was vague for a reason and there's nothing wrong with a mysterious plot, just don't try too hard is what I'm saying. If you can pull this type of story off, then you will make a great story!
Otherwise: I've always wanted to read/write a story with this exact premise and am excited to see what else you can create LibraryNexus.
Keep going, you're doing great!
Also, I'm expecting at least one Markiplier reference in all of this...
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Though I have to say that I fully agree XD This is something I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for :3
Although... Maybe slightly longer segments? Would be nice to see a whole night o.o And yeah XD A Markiplier reference would be pretty dope XD
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Yeah, my comment summed up would be: make the segments longer so that the POV doesn't jump around too much.
“How long have been there?”
You missed a "you"
Otherwise, my worries in the first chapter were for naught, this chapter was much, much, much easier to follow. Aside from that one missing word above, there doesn't seem to be anything else wrong with grammar/spelling. Keep it up! I don't know why those four people downvoted this story, you don't get something as simply nice as this too often.
A quick question: This is set in the FnaF 2 location, right?
I'm also interested in how the robo-gang kept Flutters hidden from the staff and the patrons during the day...
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Thanks for that.
Yes it is in the FNaF 2 location.
As for hiding Fluttershy, how often do you think Fazbear Entertainment checks the inside of the animatronic costumes?
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...gosh... if you think about it that has to be an uncomfortable squeeze even for a little pony... that can't last for too long before she gets too big for the suits.
JUST DON'T USE THOSE SPRINGLOCK SUITS!!!
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Fazbear Management denies the existence of any animatronics classified as 'springlock.'
-W.A.
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I will cry if the sequel to this story is named "Fluttertrapped"
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I can assure you, Fluttershy will not be springtrapped.
Everyone who can be saved, will be saved.
Hmm... Considering that she's apparently adapting to a nocturnal lifestyle.... I kinda wish it had been Flutterbat instead of normal Fluttershy to end up here now XD Would've fit Fazbear so much XD though I guess you'd rather not corrupt poor Flutters xD
Hmm... That would actually be kinda neat to see o.o .... A blood sucking version of Flutterbat that'd innocently think the night guard was her meal for the night XD And the animatronics hunting the night guard in order for Flutterbat to get her nutrients so she can grow up big and strong XD It would be ADORABLE and so Evil XD
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*checks notes*
Nope, it's too early in the timeline for Flutterbat to appear.
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...... Go on~
No really don't spoil me XD
Though I hope that IF you do bring Flutterbat in.... I really hope it's not just a temporary thing ^^;;
Markiplier? That you?
Oh crap bite time in coming
Ah, so this is the... *checks Game Theory* bite of '87?
So that means the Toys get scrapped and everything gets moved to FNaF 1 now...
I'm still watching.
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~And we would love you to join us for a bite...~
<It is 19:87 on May 4th, 1987>
Oh, no...
ah cool you stopped the bite
Ah, that's not good.
So the Bite didn't happen (at least, not the way it did canonically) in this universe, huh?
Your child is in danger.... eyes lit up with blue fire...... Huh.... I... uh... I have no idea which animatronic this is O.o
Could old goldie be awakening from his slumber, or is it father Freddy ready to kick some can
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~I'm the one in your nightmares...~
~I'm the phantom you fear...~
~I'm the toy who comes alive in the night...~
~I'm the one behind the laughs you hear...~
How'd you come up with the title?
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The title of the story, or of the chapters?
that was so cool
*eyes widen and starts to get PTSFD¤*
No....no I don't wanna have a bad time!!!!
But in all seriousness good story so far.
(¤=post traumatic sans fight disorder)
Am I the only one who got what the author is going for here?
Been a while since I've heard anything from here.
I didn't leave, I'm still watching for more.
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I am as well
Bendy reference?
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Yes it is. Have a Pinkie Pie.
nice MatPat reference!
I just noticed something black bear animatronic with a red hat, is that MineCraftGAMER
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I was about to call out that one!
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No, that is not MineCraftGAMER. This bear's actually canon to FNaF.
Well, kinda. He is actually is twice the bot he will be.
I'll keep track of this one.
Plus Matpat reference!
I can't say this is the weirdest story that I've stumbled upon, but it certainly is very interesting. I'm sticking this in my read later, and hopefully I'll read it later, because it is far more intriguing than it has any right to be lol.
I loved the mark reference
Let me guess, the librarian is Stan Lee.
wilford warfstash SO MUCH YES!!!
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I was waiting for someone to spot that cameo.
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Yep, it's that guy.
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Ah yes...
It took ya long enough for that reference, mate.
Sooo...which Scooby-Doo crossover is this referencing?
Oh my god...Chica's as bad as Sweetie when it comes to anything that's not pizza.
Huh. I never knew I wanted Party Favor to be adopted by Bendy until now.
Ok, first was Shaggy, there was also Ihascupquake, but can someone tell me who the middle guy was?
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1) A future work I have planned.
2) Not just pizza. She is also can make good cupcakes.
3) Wait what? Hold on...
*checks MLP wiki*
Oh right, there is a Party Favor character. I had forgotten about that.
Needless to say, the Party Favor mentioned is not the one from Our Town.
OOOOO a friendly side to the nightmares. Nice