• Member Since 8th Nov, 2017
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Tranquil Stone


~You are only confined by the walls you build yourself~

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All those years alone, not taking care of herself. What has Sunset done? Got some friends. An amazing boyfriend, who was she foolishly broke up with before. New fans for her art. But does that all make up for her pain in the past? Sure, she's made up to everyone. Sunset's sorry. To everyone. But most of all. She's sorry to herself.

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Well, certainly didn't expect this. I thought the ending would go completely different, glad I was wrong about the ending I thought it would be. This was a good story, like most of the other stories I've seen, but this one feels different in a way, but I cant put my finger on it. Just great job with this story, one of the only ones to (almost) make me cry, the other is Rocket to Insanity, I think it was called, but I'm not sure if that counts. Keep up the good work!

9256514
Glad you enjoyed, took me about three weeks, glad that payed off! If you don't mind me asking, what was the ending you expected?

9256674
I just expected one of these three things: Something to mess up the speech, later in the story, or when I started reading it, I thought it would end with a type of painting being painted, or finally, the fight Sunset and Flash going too far, ending with someone getting hurt, and everything going down from there. I'm not sure why I thought the last one would happen, but I think it's because many stories I've read going down this path. Glad it didn't though, because the story would then get boring unless if something different happened along the path.

9256707
Oh okay. Honestly those options sound pretty good too! Thanks for telling me :twilightsmile:

It's not bad, but it feels a little disjointed overall. I'm not entirely sure how each event is supposed to lead to the next. :applejackunsure:

9256784
Could you please elaborate?

9256798
I mean, how did Sunset go from feeling unusually unhappy and awful to that speech ay the end? All I understood was that she felt bad at the beginning, then had a fight with Flash, then made up with him, and then ended up feeling better enough to make a speech on self-love. I'm having a hard time understanding how Sunset's emotions changed or are supposed to change from one point to another.

9256825
Oh, thanks for the feedback! I would like to say that Sunset wasn't necessarily happy or unhappy throughout the story. She felt 'not whole' and 'not complete', and by the end of the speech she wasn't really happy or sad. She just had the courage to be able to apologise to herself. But this story was a very open ended one- it's entirely up to you how you want to comprehend it, but that's just what I had on my mind :pinkiesmile:

This was an interesting story to read. I'm glad I finally got to read it through. There have been numerous, to put it mildly, variations on Sunset dealing with unhappiness and all, but I enjoyed this telling well enough. Good work. :twilightsmile:

9258125
Thank you, glad you enjoyed :pinkiehappy:

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