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FerociousCreation


Improve your skill by making it grow an inch a day. You will surprise yourself after a year goes by.

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Twilight seeks out Sombra's horn after his defeat to study it but quickly finds herself studying with him once she finds the horn. Despite Sombra safely residing inside his own horn, Twilight learns that he is slowly dying.

How will Twilight behave once she learned of Sombra's fate?

The original cover art was done by a friend of mine, Ablaze Emblemier.

The redone cover art was drawn and colored by, Elu.

Thank you both Ablaze and Elu.

This story is a submission to the Dear Love: A Beautiful Discord writing contest.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 24 )

Holy shitake mushrooms this was great! Hit me right in the feels

Sukyo #3 · 1 week ago · · ·

Came for lewd Princess, left with Depression.
[I hope there's a sequel of some sort, amazing how you can stuff an entire story of events into one chapter..]

Im in tears over here. please don't let it end like this.

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Sombra answered calmly. “And create a farewell gift.”

WAIT did he knocked up Twilight?!

This was such a wonderful and captivating story!

Sombra was very in character (in my humble opinion) and Twilight, too. The only tiny nitpick I have is that sometimes Twilight speaks like Sombra.

“It was! Anyways, I had a great time with my friends. We performed many activities with each other, consisting of hikes, stargazing, and mining.”

But that’s about it! 10/10 -ign “would cry again.”

Loved it. Wishing for a sequel.

Damn, what a read.

As an aside: Those ninja's with onions are really good at what they do...

Great read! The characters felt spot on. Up the ladder of feature list you go! Right now you've topped non-mature and are third highest on mature. :twilightsmile:

Tell me your secret! How did you make a single chapter so chock full of meaningful plot and irresistible emotions?!

...

Why do you do this to me? :fluttercry:


I beg you, please, I want a version where King Sombra gets to live! A full-blown story, if possible. I beg you!

Damn... This is probably the third most emotional story I've ever read. Number 2 was Two Step, a Left 4 Dead horror and adventure fic, and Number 1 was Northern Lights and Ocean Dreams, a Pokemon romance and drama fic.

Dammit, the feels!

Admittedly, I had a slightly odd impression with the 'head forming at the end of the horn' line - until reading further, I was imagining a little Sombra-head sticking out of the base like the ice-cream on a cone.

Damn, haven't read something so....emotional in a while, brilliant piece of work.

Hey new cover art! Nice!

I came for a Twilight/Sombra fic, I left with depression... :fluttercry:

Very good work here, good sir or madam! Very good!





Also, new cover art. Nice.

9221544
Your profile picture is beautiful! XD

9222464
Damn right it is

9222666
Well, thank you! And nice work with this and the feature! It's nice seeing some more Sombra content~

9222670 I assume you had a good liking to it :3

Honestly, I am surprised that the updated cover art brought the story back onto the featured list (with non-mature stories filtered)

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Nice cover art catches attention and says good things about your story. And ye, I tend to lurk around Sombra content to see what's good, and this one got a like from me.

*looking through my "Great" bookshelf*

Ooh, nice new cover art you got there. Looks great!

Aw man... I never thought I'd ever see good SomLight on here :fluttershysad:
HOW DARE YOU BE SO GOOD :applecry::applecry::applecry:

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