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Bronyxy


Pony fan inspired by great writers such as Pen Stroke and Conner Cogwork

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This story takes place between Season 2 Episode 07 "May the Best Pet Win" and Season 3 Episode 05 "Magic Duel".

Rainbow Dash has a really bad dream, but soon finds out she’s not alone. Can this be a coincidence and if not, what’s happening and why?

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 12 )

Could use a quick pass over to fix up paragraph spacing. Sometimes they are double spaced, sometimes not, the inconsistent formatting is really distracting. Otherwise this was good.

9215353
Thanks for your comment and the advice. Sorry you found the line spacing a distraction - I was trying to emphasize specific short sentences for dramatic effect. I'm glad you stuck with it, and thanks for the words of support!

9215088
Thanks - you're welcome back any time!

THIS IS SOOO COOOOL RAWRXDXDXD HAD ME IN :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Glad you enjoyed it!

:pinkiehappy:

You know, when I first saw this story I though it'd have more chapters. Please respond to this comment.

9216777
Some stories I write are long, others are short. This one just happened to come out medium length.

Well done, with an ending I totally did not see coming!

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Thanks! I thought I would explore a different angle on the magic amulet theme.
Trust Trixie to get caught up in it!
:trixieshiftleft:

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I was thinking more of Alice Cooper, but I'm pleased you made a connection that you like!

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