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The storm king's army is broken and with his defeat, the hippogriffs once more wish to renew the pact of friendship they made with Equestria all those years ago. Giving princess Skystar the perfect chance to see her six new friends, and more importantly the pony she spent all night partying with.

Kink Warnings. Hoof holding, two girls having crushes on each other, a gratuitous amount of bad jokes and a single not swear.

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Amusing, very cute.

You have spelling errors in your story summary:

  • “freidnship” should be “friendship”
  • “pony shes missed” should be “pony she’s missed”

If you didn’t even spend the time to read your summary after you wrote it, it doesn’t bode well for the quality of the story itself.

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Or, fimfiction was having problems and I had to resubmit the story thirteen times (resetting and eventually copy-pasting) the same description over and over until I got annoyed and stopped paying attention.

I LOVE THE MAN'S BIG HARD ---- IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN:heart::heart:heart:

“Cus there the wurst!”.

Should be they're.

“So your not mad?” Fluttershy asked hesitantly.

Should be you're.

"I’m so glad your here

Should be you're.

“Zylaphone recital.”

Xylophone?

“Don't tell me your going to ditch me as well?”

You're.

I did thoroughly enjoy the story, a cute but off fluff. Also, Zaboomafoo!!!

I do so love a cute little romance story. Nicely done. Like the mature rated joke too.

“That's it! Maybe they all got bit by some sort of crazy bug and we are the only sane ones left!”

Lol, I somehow found this helluva ironic since it's Pinks that said this :rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie pouted, crossing her hooves over her chest. “I guess I shouldn't make any sausage puns then.”

“Wait, what are you.. Oh no you don-”

“Cus there the wurst!” The pink pony toppled over in laughter, clutching her chest with both hooves as her assistant stood silently, trying desperately to have an aneurysm.

Wasn't expecting this joke and I loved it all the same :pinkiehappy::yay:

Larry raised an eyebrow at the sight of the mare’s frayed mane and tail and overall completely unkempt appearance but chose to say nothing.

What the hell was Dashie doin' before she showed to bail on Pinks :rainbowhuh:?

Anyways, loved this story a hella lot. Glad I decided to explore and come across this gem of urs :twilightsmile:

I was not expecting the Meet the Medic reference in there but damn am I glad you tossed in! XD

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