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Withania


Ponyville Botanist by day. Wholesome vore writer by night.

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This is such a creative idea for a vore story. I bet Withania wasn't expecting that. As far as I'm concerned, the "good" ending was the least fulfilling by far.

omg that dragon one.

I almost feel like the "pay it forward part was prompting her to write the next chapter from somehow avoiding the dragon and encountering some new beast or trap, pages magically appearing as she writes to turn the book into one big game of Round Robin.

Well this was a fun read, and a creative idea for a story.

> “Pah, easy road is for tourists,” said Withania

And with that line, I already found myself loving this character and the story. Getting a laugh that soon into something is always a good sign.

I also have to say, this story struck a cord with me because one of my earliest indications of having an interest in vore actually came from a Choose You Own Adventure book. Sadly I can't remember which one right now, but I believe it involved a cave that sent you through time. One of the ‘bad’ endings involved getting eaten by the Loch Ness monster, including a picture of the monster with a pair of legs sticking out from its open mouth. I had no idea vore was even a thing at that point in my life, but the ending and the image always held such an interest for me. And so basically let me conclude this bit of rambling by saying thank you for the little nostalgia trip your story here provided, as well as the enjoyment that it brought for its own well written content.

Loan it to Twilight. Let's see what Twilight gets out of it.

This reminds me of a CYOA book I had as a kid "UFO 571" (edit. Nope it was UFO 54-40) I think. You were trapped on a UFO and were trying to escape/get home/get to a paradise planet.. but none of the endings were good. In fact one is the bad endings had you slowly reverse in age until you were a featus again.

There was a "good ending" but it was impossible to get too.

EDIT: found it here https://gizmodo.com/remember-inside-ufo-54-40-the-unwinnable-choose-your-o-1552187271

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