Welcome to my first story! This here is a Hollow Knight story featuring our dear friend the Knight waking up in the middle of a strange forest, confused and afraid of her new situation. Will she find out how this happened? Will she recover her missing prisoner? Can I finally have a V8? Maybe! I hope you enjoy and stay tuned for more in the future!
A massive thanks goes out to SwordTune for helping me edit this initial train wreck of a story. His assistance was absolutely wonderful and the feedback was as precise as I could hope for. Please give him a visit and throw some work his way, he more than deserves it!
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This is amazing.
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Thank you! Both for the kind words, watch, and favorite! Truth be told this is actually doing a lot better than I expected. ^^;; I kind of just sat down yesterday evening and power wrote this and submitted it before dashing off to finish yard work. Glad you liked it!
2 things:
1) Yes! Finally! A hollow knight crossover! For some reason, this is the only one despite the game being so good.
2) Is this a one-shot or are you going to keep it going?
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I hate to sound like a broken record, but this is indeed amazing. You, my good sir/madam, have done something rare indeed. You have made a one shot that can easily be made into a series. If this is power writing, I would love to see what your slow writing would be like.
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Not really sure tbh, this was wrote in a literal fit of inspiration, but if enough interest is shown it might get a sequel. And thank you!
More please
It's wonderful to see a Hollow Knight story after all this time! And you've got a good start with this.
Wiggle wiggle wiggle! This story has been edited and I'm now back in the game, baby! Expect a new story sometime next month, cause the Knight is going to be taking Equestria by storm, and the Radiance can only wish she had as much luck as Celestia when she does. Thanks to everyone following this so far, I hope I don't let you down!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
This was interesting! I’m not familiar with Hollow Night lore, but I had no trouble following the story and figuring out what kind of world the Knight came from based on her thoughts and actions. The fact that she doesn’t recognize wolves, rabbits, or ponies (albeit cartoony versions) is pretty curious, but that probably has to do with her a bug. I want to know more about her world, and what Radiance is going to do to Equestria, so I hope you write more.
There was a typo I spotted:
I think that should be “that might’ve” or “that could’ve”.
Very nice beginning, makes me look forward to the upcoming chapters, despite the fact I know next to nothing about the Hollow Knight. Noticed a few random errors--might go through it again and comb for them if you want me to--and also a little strange shift from it to her in terms of referring to Fluttershy. But these are just a few nitpicks of mine.
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Will def be doing more, and noted! Thanks, will fix it when I get the chance.
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By all means, go through it with an Inquisition if you want! I'm always open to critique and stuff, every little bit helps me grow. And thank you, glad you liked it.
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Sent you a PM with what I found.
Glad I could help a little
This story is not that bad...although I'm not so sure if the pure vessel is a boy or girl but whatever it's still a good story
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Canonically genderless. All the Vessels are.
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Right.....still good that someone gave it a gender (even if it can kill someone in a matter of seconds)
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I guess so.
Where are all you peeps coming from all of a sudden!?
Either way, thanks to anyone who's been favoriting this or sticking it on their bookshelves. I've got something in the works rn, been hectic due to job related things and irl concerns. Stay tuned! And also stay hydrated, been hot as crap everywhere as of late.
Good story
the hollow knight is an it
dude, MOAR, i need this story to continue
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Yes, no Vessel has a gender.
Before that, I’m fairly certain the Pure Vessel would have turned out as a boy.
I hope this gets continued, it's a really great story!