You may want to slow the pacing of the story down a bit, because it feels like the plot is running an hour marathon in ten minutes. Other than that, so far so good.

A few things I would like to tell you, one, everytime I see the story title I laugh on the inside. Two, I'm actually going to give the first hint on 8 more chapters, and about the "first hint" part, I'm going to give you a hint in every chapter after that.

F*** yeah man I will distract by the way I kiss you if you were a woman but I ain't gay so where are you girl

When are you releasing the more powerful variant of your Beastmen and your others species and army?

So now the attack's begin... Those ponies have some Karma coming for them.

Also did not see notification of a new chapter... Oh well, it happens-

Will any ponies be redeemable, or are against Celestia's madness?

I am quite surprised and happy how much the story has improved over such a short amount of time. It is still a bit rushed for my taste, but the main character did something that only rarely happens in people's first story: An MC who considers the odds and reconsiders his plans. In other words, the protagonist thought, which was a delightful surprise.

But, there is still one thing I would like to mention: The size of units in the lore, is most of the time, not the same scale they are in the game... Just watch some of the cutscenes and compare the ground units (for example marines) to, for instance, a battlecruiser.

holy shit u updated

um the emperor uses holy firearms of badassery. were the fuck is the loyalist raven guard and there bolters

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Well, we now Luna is

As several people across fimfiction have said....MOAR!!!

This is awesome please make more I want to see those ponies suffer oh hell the God emperor

MOAR

When is the update coming up

Hy is this story dun

Yo when you gonna update

Please do more

When is the next chapter

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Yeah, but I can't wait for him to, UPDATE, *cough* I mean, for him to upgrade and go to the more OP units from games, like the Space Marines Spartans, planetary annihilation units and Titans, ACU commander for our Displaced but with a core that WILL NOT become nuke unless set to self destruct gunships, Halo units besides the Spartans, and let's list one more, oh yeah, the Zergall things 40k besides the dumbshit orc that need to BURN

WE NEED MORE

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Thx U.

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I agree, please do.

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MORE

Holy shit this is good.

Please keep working on this, we all really love it and would love to see more

Ahahahahah I like this story and I hope you Will continue it.👍

Start using real men. And bullets. Not this primitive shit. I wanna see Celestia's head get blown off by a shotgun.