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Silver Butcher


I shall Butcher your dreams

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Sick of Zephyr constantly hitting on her, Rainbow Dash uses a love potion to make him fall in love with Lightning Dust. As it turns out, this was a rather good Idea.

This story take's place Before Hug Chug so enjoy that fact

Once again I have no idea who made the cover, just found it with google

This story was Requested by superfun

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

That was a great start, though it needs a few spelling and grammar fixes.

Love potions are NEVER a good idea.
Just ask the Crusaders.

That's a good idea... it promises so much, I'll wait for the next chapter.

9582575
oh, well since you said plz I'll try and work on it

Are you willing to get a prereader? If you want, I can help.

9611919
Sure I see nothing wrong with that

Do I need to commission the next chapter to get it done, or is it just taking a while?

10583224
Its just taking a while I'm sorry kind of got stuck for what to do next

10583272
Maybe start the chapter with the two making awkward small talk until the love potion kicks in?

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