9199551 Just some errors in grammar. You should be able to spot them if you give the story another read-through. Considering this was your first effort writing a story, you did a decent job.
919967I It's called 'being different', not everyone is the same as you nor will everyone agree with each other, so instead of claiming they have no taste, you should respect people's likes, dislikes, and opinions. If everyone was the same, this world would be very boring where humans have no flaws and dislikes.
9199842 It happens. Alot of stories tend to attacked, bashed, hated and judged harshly either due to grammar/spelling, the genre, theme, or direction of the story.
Good idea, poor execution. Repetitive sentencee structure and mediocre descriptions.
I will say this could use some work, but I have trouble seeing the Wonderbolts' reason for this as anything sensible. I also have trouble understanding RDs reasons for stressing over it. It's so unlike her the way she's acting. All in all, it just seems rushed and totally forced. It makes logical sense, but most readers like to be able to immerse themselves in a story. That becomes difficult when your characters aren't acting quite like a real person would
9199652 Trust me, everyone who read this probs likes diapers. I personally downvoted it for the execution which made for an honestly downvotable read. I'm honest about shit. If I didn't like ABDL, and I read a well written story, I'd upvote it anyways because I respect effort. I know this is your first story and all, but thats probably what got you the downvotes
Hmm. Seems there may be more to what Spitfire is requesting than is shown first hoof. Perhaps someone is trying to humiliate the bolts and is using magic to make them weaker in the bladder and bowel department? That or they could be setting up for long travels and events outside of Equestria? The newly discovered lands are further out and acts may be a little more taxiing than going about Equestria?
Definitely will keep reading to see what may be going on. Soarin seems to be the first to be impacted followed by Dashie. What will be next?
9203905 Hm... Maybe Rainbow Dash could've been the one to flood her flight suit, so she had to wear diapers. Then, she'd have a reason to stress because maybe she'd have to wear them until the accidents stop.
I dunno, it just seems like as the main character, the diaper stuff should be more focused on RD
Eh. Not feeling this so far. Spelling and grammar are ok. Didn't notice any major mistakes in that department. And the subject matter is something I enjoy so its not that.
I like the general idea so far but it does however feel forced and maybe a little rushed. Particularly the explanation for why they now need to wear diapers.
I notice you said this is your first story so I'm putting it down to being new to this. Keep at it, with practice you'll get better.
I've been making a story, the first one got rejected, so now I have to remake it, could I possible get some advice... -goes into fluttershy mode- um...if...that's...okay...?
Glad to be working with you on this.
haha
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Ya thx you so much I really did need the help make it thank you SuperPinkBrony12
Nice work.
Please come and join my group and post your fic and all future fics there. You can never get to much attation to your work.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213925/mlp-diaper-spanking
9199418 That's true.
Why does this have so many disliikes? I thought this was quite good, despite the minor hiccups. Looking forward to reading more.
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thx you for the comment and were was the minor hiccup
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Because there are people who dislike diapers, or grown ponies wearing diapers.
but this is my first story i ever made i work hard on it and had help making it and edit by SuperPinkyBrony12
9199551 Just some errors in grammar. You should be able to spot them if you give the story another read-through. Considering this was your first effort writing a story, you did a decent job.
9199652 And those people don't have good taste.
919967I
It's called 'being different', not everyone is the same as you nor will everyone agree with each other, so instead of claiming they have no taste, you should respect people's likes, dislikes, and opinions. If everyone was the same, this world would be very boring where humans have no flaws and dislikes.
9199652 I hate that they do that even though you warn them what's in the fic.
9199842
It happens. Alot of stories tend to attacked, bashed, hated and judged harshly either due to grammar/spelling, the genre, theme, or direction of the story.
Writing still needs a lot of work but you can get there with practice. take your time in thinking it through and you will get there. Good luck
I have no idea what were you thinking when you wrote this fiction... 3/10
Good idea, poor execution. Repetitive sentencee structure and mediocre descriptions.
I will say this could use some work, but I have trouble seeing the Wonderbolts' reason for this as anything sensible. I also have trouble understanding RDs reasons for stressing over it. It's so unlike her the way she's acting. All in all, it just seems rushed and totally forced. It makes logical sense, but most readers like to be able to immerse themselves in a story. That becomes difficult when your characters aren't acting quite like a real person would
3/10 Mediocre, could use some work
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Trust me, everyone who read this probs likes diapers. I personally downvoted it for the execution which made for an honestly downvotable read. I'm honest about shit. If I didn't like ABDL, and I read a well written story, I'd upvote it anyways because I respect effort. I know this is your first story and all, but thats probably what got you the downvotes
Hmm. Seems there may be more to what Spitfire is requesting than is shown first hoof. Perhaps someone is trying to humiliate the bolts and is using magic to make them weaker in the bladder and bowel department? That or they could be setting up for long travels and events outside of Equestria? The newly discovered lands are further out and acts may be a little more taxiing than going about Equestria?
Definitely will keep reading to see what may be going on. Soarin seems to be the first to be impacted followed by Dashie. What will be next?
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(This is not meant as a snide but as an honest question)
What sort of reasoning would you suggest?
9203905
Hm...
Maybe Rainbow Dash could've been the one to flood her flight suit, so she had to wear diapers. Then, she'd have a reason to stress because maybe she'd have to wear them until the accidents stop.
I dunno, it just seems like as the main character, the diaper stuff should be more focused on RD
Just an opinion
Eh. Not feeling this so far. Spelling and grammar are ok. Didn't notice any major mistakes in that department. And the subject matter is something I enjoy so its not that.
I like the general idea so far but it does however feel forced and maybe a little rushed. Particularly the explanation for why they now need to wear diapers.
I notice you said this is your first story so I'm putting it down to being new to this. Keep at it, with practice you'll get better.
I've been making a story, the first one got rejected, so now I have to remake it, could I possible get some advice... -goes into fluttershy mode- um...if...that's...okay...?