Ah geez are you doing that thing where you publish the chapters earlier but keep them hidden until a later date? They won't show up in people's trackers if you do that. I had no clue this story had been updating.
Wow....there is a serious disconnection between the love and attention that Celestia seem to have for Sunset and what Sunset seem to have experienced....
Possibly mental magic shaenigan?Or it is just that Celestial want to atone for her mistakes and lack of attention for her freaking “daughter”?Or maybe it’s Sunset Perception of things that have been altered by her anger and loneliness or other factors?Regardless,something is very very wrong here.
Ah and interesting to see that Gry experienced the rage of Sunset with such clarity(maybe too much clarity if her reaction is anything to go by?).Anyways,such rage seem downright unnatural to me.I repeat myself but something is very very wrong here.(or maybe not?I don’t know)Oh and Gry thought about the fact that the gards are here for restraining her....well I don’t know if she is right or if it’s just her anger that speak but it’s clearly not good.And the situation was going so well too....
Really interested in this story.Continue the good work!
Possibly mental magic shaenigan?Or it is just that Celestial want to atone for her mistakes and lack of attention for her freaking “daughter”?Or maybe it’s Sunset Perception of things that have been altered by her anger and loneliness or other factors?Regardless,something is very very wrong here.
Something's very wrong here seems to be theme in Winter's visions of Equestria. While we don't have the full picture yet Celestia's already admitted she neglected Sunset and either didn't know or didn't care about what Sunset went through. Also the conversation with Dr Strange (and Celestia's lack of reaction) gave us one small piece of the puzzle, this Equestria has concubines/sex slavery and Shining Armour (tried? succeded?) wanted Sunset to be used by the royal guard. Sunsets time in the human world would have changed her moral/ethical view, adding this to the hate pile, while Celestia doesnt see anything wrong with it. Just these three things hinted at so far have turned humans into murderers. Although I don't understand if Sunset is an orphan that Celestia "adopted" or is she Celestia's daughter but "hidden" as an orphan for security/image?
wait a minute. you're making a VRMMORPG... for a degree in ENGLISH. Okay that's fucking awesome. Hopefully you have some time to write and publish new chapters.
Also, a meta comment, I really enjoy how you're able to make Celestia a villain, willing or otherwise in your stories. I mean, it's not uncommon but you do it rather well.
"I am born of water from my circle of infinity. Please give the shapeless form from deep within my heart. Summon forth the elixir of life from the light of the moon to the palm of my hand!"
Why.... equestra's default magic that give everyone to do chanless and and multicast should be good enough. Why regressed back to webnovel's generic?
Ah geez are you doing that thing where you publish the chapters earlier but keep them hidden until a later date? They won't show up in people's trackers if you do that. I had no clue this story had been updating.
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It's my fault. I published 1 before it was done and this created a chain of confusion. It should be fixed for next year.
Wow....there is a serious disconnection between the love and attention that Celestia seem to have for Sunset and what Sunset seem to have experienced....
Possibly mental magic shaenigan?Or it is just that Celestial want to atone for her mistakes and lack of attention for her freaking “daughter”?Or maybe it’s Sunset Perception of things that have been altered by her anger and loneliness or other factors?Regardless,something is very very wrong here.
Ah and interesting to see that Gry experienced the rage of Sunset with such clarity(maybe too much clarity if her reaction is anything to go by?).Anyways,such rage seem downright unnatural to me.I repeat myself but something is very very wrong here.(or maybe not?I don’t know)Oh and Gry thought about the fact that the gards are here for restraining her....well I don’t know if she is right or if it’s just her anger that speak but it’s clearly not good.And the situation was going so well too....
Really interested in this story.Continue the good work!
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Something's very wrong here seems to be theme in Winter's visions of Equestria. While we don't have the full picture yet Celestia's already admitted she neglected Sunset and either didn't know or didn't care about what Sunset went through.
Also the conversation with Dr Strange (and Celestia's lack of reaction) gave us one small piece of the puzzle, this Equestria has concubines/sex slavery and Shining Armour (tried? succeded?) wanted Sunset to be used by the royal guard. Sunsets time in the human world would have changed her moral/ethical view, adding this to the hate pile, while Celestia doesnt see anything wrong with it. Just these three things hinted at so far have turned humans into murderers.
Although I don't understand if Sunset is an orphan that Celestia "adopted" or is she Celestia's daughter but "hidden" as an orphan for security/image?
things are escalating like a super sonic rocket
I like it
wait a minute. you're making a VRMMORPG... for a degree in ENGLISH. Okay that's fucking awesome. Hopefully you have some time to write and publish new chapters.
Also, a meta comment, I really enjoy how you're able to make Celestia a villain, willing or otherwise in your stories. I mean, it's not uncommon but you do it rather well.
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Look's at notes... List of villains...many...
Obsidian Sunrise smirks
Why.... equestra's default magic that give everyone to do chanless and and multicast should be good enough. Why regressed back to webnovel's generic?
Get the fuck back in the giant robot, sunset.