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Flammenwerfer


This is fiction. But it is based...

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I've never been this early to a story I actually want to read... I look forward to it!

I soo loved "Sculpting Marble". I look forward to reading this one.

*notice this was in* *slam the upvote until I break the button*

File under: READ IT NOW! ALL OF YOU. IMMEDIATELY.

Oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes this is gonna be good.

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I shall read it the next day.

Ever since I started paying more attention to the Barcast, I've been seeing you guys time and time again now. It's good to recognize some buddies.

Oh, not a bad first half. Definitely can't wait for the next. Hope it's done soon

OH BOY HERE WE GO

This was even better than I hoped. I can't wait for the next part buddy.

She personally enjoyed the combination of his rather straight, dark-brown hair with his oddly light-brown eyes; they went well with his paler skin. The back of his aforementioned hair appeared to be groomed neatly and fell to the back of his neck…

I was going make a joke about how this story was like a big ol’ middle finger to Mudbriar . . . then I read this sentence, and started to wonder.

Is Andrew basically a human version of Mud Briar, then? At least, appearance wise?

"Once privy to Maud crying from stress once."
Might want to remove one of those "onces."

“And quite frankly… I love it. Because I like you. And I want you.”

“So we can do this the easy way, or the hard way. The choice is yours…”

“Okay I see you’re choosing the hard way…”

Do I see a sense a warriors spirit in Maud?

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=-W2KBFYxvlY&t=48s

Boondocks reference spotted

Ok, is it just me or does maud in the coverart look creepy as hell?

Please complete this before moving on to anything else.

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She looks like a bat pony without wings... which is an interesting idea. She does live in a cave... hmmm!

Was Maud about to "Chris Handsom" Andrew?

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? Sorry I do not know that word.

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Basically the teenage version of alright, complete with all the angst in the world

You gonna write Limestone too?
Then that'll make all three pie sister.....besides pinkie

Don't get me wrong I love pinkie. But I think of her more of the mane 6 set.
If somehow you do write about Pinke too, that'll be cool too.

there will still be a continuation?:rainbowhuh:

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Fleece Johnson-inspired Maud? *scampers for the hills and digs in*

Can't wait for the continuation:pinkiehappy:

hay do continue it:heart:

Chapter 2 when?

I'd love to read more, but it's been almost 5 years since this story was left incomplete. Very nice writing, although the thought of so much valuable parchment near a blazing fire felt like foreshadowing. I'd have enjoyed it more if they had put it in a safe place before relaxing, although the author did say the fire was contained.

But the depth of description of the setting and characters and their history was unusually rich and enjoyable, indicative of a skilled and experienced writer. Can readers recommend other stories by the author?

Man, after Sculpting Marble, I was glad to see Maud Pie get the love she deserves (hopefully, Limestone will too), but man, we’re one chapter off from complete. I get it’s a smut fic, but MAN just one to go! :raritydespair: I hope you get back to this one day!:twilightsmile:

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