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Well, this seems interesting enough. I wonder how Dash ends up becoming a super. Tracking
hmmmmmmmm
lets see where this goes shall we?
Shes on Earth, and cover it looks like she is dressed up as Ironman..I AM INTRIIIIIIGUED!
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Look forward to more chapters (please dont have her make too big a fool of herself..pretty please?
1014886 Hehe, we'll see. This story might go on for a bit, and I've got plenty of good moments to spread throughout the story, including fool-making-ness (if that's a word). Plus three villains, plot twists and general egotistical personalities on both sides.
I'll just leave this here. I doubt the next chapters will be this fast, or this short.
Iron Dash? I think that the Pony Torch would be better.
"I AM THE IRON PONY!"
Suuuuuuper Dash! (She should now be able toooooooo REVERSE TIIIIIME!)
Dash comes from an alien planet... she's super strong and invulnerable to damage... DASH IS SUPERPONY!
Good work
The speed of sound is 760mph; she'd have to be going at least that fast, considering she'd just broken the sound barrier.
1021722 Sorry, that meant to say... per second? I feel ashamed to call myself a man of science now; it must have slipped by me. I'll get it fixed.
How does one-thousand miles an hour sound?
There, that's better. A thousand mph should be just about right, being halfway between Mach 1 and 2 (assuming that the "second Rainboom" you were talking about is at Mach 2, of course).
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NO! You MUST go on!
Actually, this story was amazing, and the ending wasn't enough to end with!
It's too into the story to stop now!
I will even cheer you on as more chapters are added!
1025438 Thanks, hopefully I'll get another chapter out tonight. Bad news is I just bought the complete set of Centennial, which, if you don't know, is 21 hours of the best Western show of all time. So that's taken a bit of priority over writing.
But fear not! I shall continue writing no matter what!
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(Not trying to sound like I'm trying to boss you)
Oh, so glad to hear that!
And I know how it feels to like a show... what else am I on this website for?
Anyway, like I said, I will cheer you as you add on to the story!
Good luck writing it! I await the next chapter... with patience, of course.
Here is (the only MLP cheer I can find) my cheer to you!
Mother of Celestia. This. Is. EPIC!!!!!!
It's going great so far, but unless Scootaloo somehow shows up as well later on it probably isn't appropriate to list her as a main character. ^^
I'd give it an 8.5/10. One point lost for the rather abrupt beginning and another half for a few very minor spelling errors I caught here and there. It kept me quite entertained though, so as long as it updates every now and then it's perfectly fine!
1027730 But, E'rybody loves Scoots
I'll take her down. And thanks for the technically first constructive feedback. I'm working on fleshing out Chapter 4 so it's not so awkwardly paced.
Tony Stark, Iron Man, meets
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1027753 You are Spiderman.
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I've seen enough...
Into my favorites list this goes...
This...is..........EPIC!!!!!!
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1053703 Me gusta Rarity, AND Iron Dash? Awesome pic!
You are a genius! You must get Rainbow into a brawl with Thor!
And then there came a day unlike any other...............
1076312 Oh, I've got a big surprise in store between Rainbow Dash and Thor.
...Also, I guess I turned into Zecora for a minute there...
How much longer until chapter 4 comes out?
1135021 Hopefully not long. I'm on vacation right now, so writing is sorta slower than usual, even though I sorta promised people it would have been out on Saturday
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Oh, well, OK. To help make it slightly more enjoyable, here are some videos for you to watch.
Want It, Need It (Hold Me)
Picture Perfect Pony
PONIES The Anthology II (WARNING: Over 60+ Minutes)
PARTY.MOV
1135785 Hmm, I'mma have to go with the Picture Perfect Pony, since I consider myself more of the animation type of person than anything else.
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I just gave you videos to watch, so I didn't need your preferences. All you had to do was acknowledge that you recieved them and may or may not watch them.
Hey, congratulations on making feature! You really earned it.
Nice to see an update after all this time.
However, while your writing is clear and to the point, until we get a bit further into the story I can't say too much as to what I think of the plot so far as there isn't quite enough to go on.
Still, I eagerly await the next installment.
Another epic chapter!
1214234 Thank you. When I saw, I screamed like a little girl mixed with a caffeine-induced squirrel. Feels were had.
1214239 Yeah, I sorta just wanted to get this one out of the way. The beginning offers a tiny glimpse of plot, but the next chapter is where it starts to get a bit more concise. ...I think that's the right word. Or maybe not, I'm too lazy to check.
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Nice job /)
Now I get to wonder to myself which Avengers these are. The Movieverse Avengers? Earth's Mightiest Heroes? 616? Ultimate?
1214318 Well, let's say they're loosely based off of the most recent film, with only slight tweaks. You'll see what I mean when I pull the villains out. Though 616 did pique my interest... Vision was always a badass.
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This sums up my reaction
HOw i think Fury feels when Iron man says he's chasing a rainbow colored pony:
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I can see why you'd go with Movieverse. All the other versions of the Avengers are so experienced and jaded at this point that a talking rainbow pegasus wouldn't even warrant a blink. The rookie team allows for more comedy. Plus in 616 Reed Richards or Doctor Strange could probably figure out how to send Rainbow home in under five minutes.
I assume the evil SCA reject is a movieverse variant on Nathaniel Garret the Black Knight silver age Iron Man villain. If this version's given in fully to the Ebony Blade and accepted its full power he'd be a decent full team level threat. Though doing that tends to make the wielder too psychotic and megalomaniacal to serve anyone as a henchman.
1215536 ... I think I love you.
Yes, you got the Black Knight/Nathaniel Garret part right, but from what I recall Garrett was never able to wield the Ebony Blade, unless I'm mistaken. Nevertheless, I've worked it into the story (through the means of another big-name villain, who shall leave his big name... nameless, for the moment), as well as Elendil, which is something Rainbow Dash probably won't be too fond of.
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IIRC Garret knew what the Ebony Blade could do to its wielder and refused to touch it shirking his duty as the Black Knight for supervillainy instead.
Another amazi- I mean MARVELOUS chapter.
Nice how you added the Black Knight. He was always one of my dad's favorite villains. Though I can't say I know too mutch about him. My problem, as a nerd, is that I keep my interests a little too spread out. I could probably tell you a little about a lot of nerdy topics, whereas most nerds could probably tell you a lot about several. So depending on what else you decide to referance in this story, I could either follow it completely or become very lost. I'm still waiting for a brawl between Thor and Rainbow.....
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1217864 Jamal is the least threatening of terrorist names. Jus' Saiyan.
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A Saiyan is going to show up in this? Be prepared for a lot of downvotes double-crossovers get a lot of hate
1218643 Saiyans : Why wait for the fanbase to make Mary Sues when you can do it yourself!
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lol