This story is a sequel to Things Change
When in the past Twilight had pondered the possibility of reforming Queen Chrysalis, she'd always thought about it in a hopeful way, imagining all the good things that would come from bringing her to the good side of things. The reformation process had certainly not gone the way she'd expected it to, but now Chrysalis was finally one of them, someone she could call a friend, willing to come with her and learn from her.
A creature strong enough to overpower Celestia, with no memory of her time as an evil shape-shifting love-stealing queen, with no knowledge of how to properly interact with others, and with a very poor understanding of how to treat personal space when meeting someone new. Maybe inviting her to stay in the castle in Ponyville had not been the best of decisions.
Nice start
lolz cool!
... Well? Does she?
Got a source to credit your title image?
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Hover above it and click the little white box that reads "Source" in the bottom right corner.
Well, this is a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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It's by JaDeJynX
Just finished the prequel, and boy I loved it! I can’t wait to read this!
Pft, ok, interesting set up with this Starlight not actually being reformed, and just pretending to be their friends. I have a feeling this is ether just gonna be a running joke for this one, or, is gonna end up being the main meat of it, with Chrysalis being the one to beat/actually reform her. ...which would be ironic as hell.
I like you are making Starlight still be a villain.
This starlight is so much more realistic then in the show.
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umm... isn't it pretty much how it is in the actual show? Or did I miss something?
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All of seasons 7 and 8?
If she’s pretending why would she have offered friendship to Chrysi the first time?
...Just now got the theme of the chapter titles, Slow I am.
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She heard the word pear being compared to her. That’s why.
Is AJ not talking out of pure vitriol? Or did you just not want to try to type out her accent?
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To placate Twilight.
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Twilight isn’t listening for most of this.
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I guesing the answer to that is "yes".
best. quote. ever.
Da fuq is going on?
I know this fic is crazy, but this chapter, like, 60% crazier. It made some sense before, now none.
I'm lost... Badly
Dang, Wintermist needs to write faster. Clearly FiMC is backing up and starting to leak out of other writers’ fics.
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But its been finished since 2016!
So I’m guessing we have crossed over with a mind control smut story...somehow.
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Sorry. FiMC:C.
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Yeah, I should've thought to put that in my comment, well happens to everyone at some point. Happy reading!
"Starlight lied" means she told a lie. "Starlight lay against a wall" means she was in a lying position.
Also, "to thrust someone" is a typo for "to trust someone".
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lie (as in lie down)
past tense: lay ("I walked in as she lay there") (This is what Xanni properly identified as correct)
past participle: lain ("She had lain there for hours")
lie (as in tell a lie)
lied (This is what Xanni properly identified as incorrect)
lied
lay (as in lay something down)
laid
laid
I really want to know about what Twilight had planned for Rarity. In detail. Lots of glorious detail.
This version of Chrysalis is absolute adorbs!
So this version of Starlight is still evil... okay.
Okay why isn't Applejack speaking?
What is this other story by the way?
This story finished?