Reincarnation, it allows for old souls to be new again at the cost of their memories. Atleast that is how it should happen. Now I have another life, and the memories of my old ones.
This sounds interesting. I wonder how he will take certain other students of Celestia besides Twilight who should be here in a decade. It makes me wonder if Sunset Shimmer will be showing up?
This is a very interesting premise. I’ll keep an eye on it. I don’t see if you have a proof reader/editor yet. It might be beneficial to get one later on down the road as I did notice quite a few grammatical errors. Still, I like where this is going. I look forward t seeing how things turn out.
At least this one had reason to the reincarnation, I liked the nice touch on having a sort of "Administrator" that oversaw reincarnation, and kudos to understanding that reincarnation as a soul is a process that is unbound and transcends the concept of following a linear time flow. I mean really, he had options to go to the far future and back again to the past but he got lucky with an interested power to sponsor the MC.
There are some gripes, plenty of "i" showing up, here's one from the very beginning
Darkness.
As i turn, i see nothing but darkness.
With the established fact that the "OP-ness" of the MC's convenient knowledge grants him, can be explained as a clerical error or a requirement to his sponsorship, in potentially galvanizing the growth of Equestria and the world. Typical isekai stories from asian novelizations, usually had this as one of the main reasons to bring in reincarnators. That or killing/sealing a great evil or being used as a pawn for conquest.
This sounds interesting. I wonder how he will take certain other students of Celestia besides Twilight who should be here in a decade. It makes me wonder if Sunset Shimmer will be showing up?
This is a very interesting premise. I’ll keep an eye on it. I don’t see if you have a proof reader/editor yet. It might be beneficial to get one later on down the road as I did notice quite a few grammatical errors. Still, I like where this is going. I look forward t seeing how things turn out.
At least this one had reason to the reincarnation, I liked the nice touch on having a sort of "Administrator" that oversaw reincarnation, and kudos to understanding that reincarnation as a soul is a process that is unbound and transcends the concept of following a linear time flow. I mean really, he had options to go to the far future and back again to the past but he got lucky with an interested power to sponsor the MC.
There are some gripes, plenty of "i" showing up, here's one from the very beginning
With the established fact that the "OP-ness" of the MC's convenient knowledge grants him, can be explained as a clerical error or a requirement to his sponsorship, in potentially galvanizing the growth of Equestria and the world. Typical isekai stories from asian novelizations, usually had this as one of the main reasons to bring in reincarnators. That or killing/sealing a great evil or being used as a pawn for conquest.
How was this sentence supposed to end?
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Fix it. Made a mistake from my second edit.
Awesome.
Ah like this! Hurray!