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Interesting. Specially Brian's Trolling :rainbowlaugh:

Curious to see where this will go. Also, that was a sneaky, sneaky Alicorn reveal. Does explain the train scene though, kudos for that :twilightsmile:

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👍 I could have started with that but wanted her show how oblivious she was, after all she had only been in equestria for a week and was kept from the world at large by twi/bry/their herd so as to not overwhelm her with a bowing populace. Im not sure where I'm really going to go with this story tbh but have a few ideas, its going to concentrate on slice of life stuff tho. Originally with the prequel Brian was going to be a unicorn but i decided on pegasus instead so i could concentrate on the characters instead of magical theory and that sort of stuff. I am going to use some of the ideas about magic/the society at large i had for that that story in this one. Plus I wanted to write something about the princesses, and how better to do that than another alicorn?

I'm hoping my explanation about the multiverse/string/membrane made sense tho. e.g. they must have passed through so many universes that the ponies postulated that tiny fractions of seconds had added up dramatically.

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It was an extremely interesting explanation, although it does raise questions about why do they still teach teleportation like that, and also philosophical quandaries on what does it mean to be not from where you are originally, if there's a shared soul between your instances, and most relevant if there are more versions of the two humans. That could make them teleporting be an EXTREMELY uncomfortable situation. Not to mention their presence being a divergence of untold branes, if they are indeed unique.

Rather curious on how long after the previous story this is, though. If Brian is accepting of a female name one wonders what more has he come to accept, if you know what I mean.

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I hinted that it caused some problems, more specifically for luna. I will elaborate at a later date :)

I won't deny I kinda expected more, but I'll take it as it comes. More soon?

9203705
Yeah should actually have the next chapter up in the next day or so. Was going to combine them but... eh, you'll see why :)

The hand cupping my testicles dropped to the cleft of my mons and my index finger pressed in to the valley of it, the palm of my hand softly grinding in to my clitoris.

Wait, how does that fit? She'd have to push her balls aside and probably interfere with the cock too for that, wouldn't she? :rainbowhuh:

She sat back down and gave me a look that only a naughty boy can seem to replicate. Even on her feminine face it was the expression that drove many girls to distraction. Commonly referred to as the 'shit eating grin'.

Oh Bryan, never change :rainbowlaugh:

On a not chapter related matter, I've got to say I'm curious... Why three fingers? :twilightoops:

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I'm going to put that down to 'futa physics'
Also, kind of wanted to have differences on each extremity, changing the structure of the arm seemed too awkward, chopping a finger off seemed a decent compromise.

I had not noticed this going up, but I'm glad to find it now. I wonder when she's getting the "You're probably also the hemisemidemigoddess of a cosmic force" talk.

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Sadly I haven't really had the time to do any writing since this last chapter, I prefer to do chapters in one sitting and not do paragraphs here and there so wont complete it anywhere near as fast as the 'prequel' but I have some basic ideas of how certain conversations will progress. That particular conversation will not be a 'coming soon' chapter as she will need her cutie mark first. (i dont plan on giving her one soon)
In fact, she will be getting railed by the princesses far sooner than that, after all, in this universe ponies consider sex a popular pastime dont they? :)

Sad this fic died :pinkiesad2:

Any plans to continue this hot piece of cake?

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Pls tell me you r gonna continue this story

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