9941587
If you didn't dislike my story, then who did? This stuff takes work, you know.

{edit} Not that it matters, compared to all the likes, but seriously. Do people not know quality entertainment when they see it?

You know, instead of just disliking, why not leave a legitimate reason for doing so, so I can know where to improve on my work, rather than just dislike then run away?

That was a awesome and funny chapter, I'm hoping they keep getting closer and closer.

9941672
Sees the chain of unnecessary dislikes, quick to take notice to them
So then, the simple question of "where can I improve" is asking too much then? Well, that's nice to know.

9942542
Hmm, I wonder if it's the same person? When I say "marco", you should say... C'mon, it starts with a P and ends with an O.

9942812
It's not that hard, you can do it.

Hahaha!

I love this story already, but you made it to good, because now I can’t wait for the next chapter!

But seriously, you put some nice effort into this, and
You deserve the like and the adding to my shelf. Very good story! ^^

9941672
Eh, someone will always find something wrong with everything.

9963924
Ain't that the truth. Even if there's no reason, whatsoever, they still will.