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SuperStealWriter


A guy that wants to develop a hobby and entertain.

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A bored Rainbow Dash walks into Twilight's office looking for something to do and somepony to do it with. Twilight, reluctant to go with Rainbow, decides to humor her friend and their little quest to try to catch lightning in a bottle. It soon gets out of hoof and the two need to clean their mess before the whole town gets caught up in it.

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Twilight, reluctant to go with Rainbow, decides to humor her friend and their little quest to try to catch lightning in a bottle.

Wouldn't the weather factory have that?

9874981
I dunno. Probably, but I like to think they know how to create lightning in the cloud so they wouldn't need to catch it in a bottle. It makes sense that they would have it, though. I just didn't think about it.

Some tense issues and in places wrong words are used, but this is a fun lil romp that, upon reading it, took me back to season 1 levels of mayhem. Good imagery, especially as they borrow things from the town. Very much enjoyed, thanks for sharing ^^

9879771
Thank you, I'll do my best to improve.

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