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ThePegaKris


Let your smile change the world but don't let the world change your smile.

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Haven Academy may have been saved from Salem’s faction and the White Fang, but for Team RWBY, it was only just the beginning of another journey. When Salem finally shows herself to the huntresses of Beacon, she has a different plan for them in mind.

In that instant, Team RWBY ends up in a place that’s not a part of Remnant. Upon first look, it may not seem so...Grimm.

NOTE: I do not own RWBY or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. All rights reserved go to Rooster Teeth and Hasbro.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 26 )

Keep up the good work.:ajsmug:

Bit of a rocky start, but I'll keep my eye on this.

“Huh?” as Ozpin’s voice changed to Oscar’s. “I mean, yes I do! What’s the worst thing that could happen?”

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLL

Needs a small amount of cleaning up as most times I didn’t know who was speaking and for me it (no offense btw) reads terribly but it is a good story so far regardless

The italics is broken in a few areas you might want to fix that

This piqued my interest, you have my attention

Can't wait to read more!

What happens next come on don't keep us waiting I want to know what happened next

I am not sure how I feel about this:applejackunsure:

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You don't have to keep reading.

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I'm going to give it a chance cuz I feel like there is potential

Comment posted by NightmareKnight deleted Dec 28th, 2018

Warning spoilers may appear soon. Lol

Awesome so far. :twilightsmile: But why the anthro tag? :rainbowhuh:

nicely done; it was especially clever how you acknowledged the Equestria Girls franchise, what with the talk of the mirror and such; speaking of which, I'm in agreement with Ruby: it'd be interesting to see if the RWBY cast have counterparts on either side of said mirror; I mean...

"I don't believe that's true, Ruby."

...oh: well, I'll be sticking around to see if this changes anytime soon and/or what kinds of twists and turns we get along the way; that said, there IS something I need to get out of my system:

"Aww, so much for horsing around!" Yang threw in.

well know..... seems like this problem is really 'bugging' them. :trollestia:

Comment posted by thedarkalicorn deleted February 15th

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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