• Member Since 22nd Sep, 2015
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Hazel Mee


There is nothing in the world more helpless and irresponsible and depraved than a pony in the depths of a Friendship binge.

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One of the many, many things that Lovey Dovey loves is good a carnival and the Summer Sun Fair in Canterlot is one of the very best. Popcorn, thrill rides, cotton candy, music, funnel cake, laughing foals, ice cream, happy crowds, and more cotton candy!

Fairs are not supposed to make you cry!


Winner of the Quill & Blade 2018 Super Summer Jam short story contest. OMG! :pinkiehappy:

SPOILER WARNING: This story happens after the events in Crystal Wishes' Lovey Dovey and the Business Pony and Lovey Dovey and the Uncertain Stallion, and Anzel's Three of Hearts and Three of Diamonds.

Please read them before reading this story because it really will spoil them a little. And they're great stories! Don't spoil them!

Cover image by the talented & skilled PaintedWave :heart:

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 18 )

Congratulations on your win, you deserved it! This fun and super-cute story is the story I wish I had written, but obviously the Lovey-Muse chose you for a reason. You really nailed the characters and an immersive carnival atmosphere. Lovely read!

Fun story.

greasy, shugary treats

sugary

scattering a puff of icing shugar

sugar

Congrats on 1st place!

9187291
Thank you! I'm especially pleased that you liked my carnival setting; I'm trying to improve my descriptive writing and it sounds like I'm making progress. :twilightsmile:

9188086
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you very much for the editorial feedback. :twilightsmile:

Buuut... that's just how I spell 'shugar'. I know it's technically wrong, but I really hate 'soogar' and have informed all of my automatic spell checkers of my preference on this matter. They weren't impressed.

The mystery was finally revealed!

I really enjoyed reading this one and the ending was mmmf! Just delightful. Thanks for entering... and putting the identity mystery to an end.

9188905
I just hope I can get a refund on the dark cloak and green question mark head mask I ordered on Amazon. :twilightsheepish:

Thank you for enjoying my story!

9189320
lol Crystal should just comp you. *Snickers*

Widdly Wee up the wall my main man:heart::heart::heart:

loved the story!!!!!

9237699
Thank you! Uh... I mean, you're welcome? ... No. Thank youuuuu! :twilightsmile:

9188242
That's… not how spelling works.

O Lovey you silly pone.

Came back to reread this just because... noticed you might want to change to AN there. The cover art has been replaced and is lovely.

9607566
Hello. :twilightsmile: I don't know what you mean by "change to AN".

9609669
Sorry, meant change the AN (author's note). Since it mentions the cover art having a typo and needing replaced.

9609684
Oh, I see! Thank you very much for catching that. :twilightsheepish:

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