• Member Since 18th Jan, 2018
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TimeLordStudios


Just a brony looking for a way to create work for others to see. here you will find stories that are mostly similar to each other, as most of them will be alternate timelines.

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Story takes place after season 7. This is my OC's origin story and is a partial self-insert. I tend to go back and edit this at times with and without criticism to hopefully better the story for future readers. This and the fallen star are planed to eventually join together.


Hi, my name is Blaze Star... well. Though that's my pony name. My real name is Joe.

This is my story; Pulled into Equestria, with no way back. I don't know how it happened, or why, but that cursed show had given me my dream of living in Equestria.

Yet... that same dream is also my greatest fear; the unknown, in and of an unknown world.

At least I have ponies to fill the void... right?

Right?

description revised by TheMajorTechie thanks for the help

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )

You might want an editor for this story. I see quite a few grammatical errors in the chapters, and blocktext in the long description tends to be a turnoff for new readers.

For your convenience, here's an edited version of your story's long description:

Hi, my name is Blaze Well. Though that's my pony name. My real name is Joe.

This is my story; Pulled into Equestria, with no way back. I don't know how it happened, or why, but that cursed show had given me my dream of living in Equestria.

Yet... that same dream is also my greatest fear; the unknown, in and of an unknown world.

At least I have ponies to fill the void... right?

Right?

I'd also recommend avoiding the joining of multiple stories into one. From personal experience, I can tell you that it quickly grows into a headache to manage.

9391701
Thanks for the advice. Though it may be a while before I'm able to fix.

9869607
Maybe some time soon. give it about a week or two if things go according to plan. Though it'd probably stay on hiatus.

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