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Loyal
Just a dude. Writes horsewords... with varying regularity.
Loyal
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A 2.5k word fic written within less than 60 minutes? Impressive.
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WITH 11 minutes left to do a quick edit ^.^
I type fast...
Not bad.
Genuinely surprised at the quality and length of a fanfic written in 50 minutes. Honestly, I'm sorta jealous of that kind of talent.
This was pretty good for being written in under an hour. If all the stories are going to be close to this level, then I'll be ready for whatever you throw my way.
-SoI
Arooo
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Horses and by extension ponies don't have fur...otherwise, the sexy teims was sloppy and great. Straight to the point which I lurve
and the sheer *ahem* length of the fic to allow a decent amount of set up before jumping into the main course is really quite admirable. However I didn't really like your take on Twilight's personality in the set up portion, as her mannerisms seemed to be jumping all over the place (she'd call someone "silly" but never "silly filly" unless she was doing a Pinkie Pie impression), but I simply and fully enjoyed her indulging in her Big Mac attack fantasy. The awkward lead in followed by the almost manic demeanor she put on because she knew it was just a fantasy while simultaneously giving into it. It was ze magicks. 
Another thing: lots of clop writers seem to forget that the flanks are well, on a pony's sides. Hence, flanks. Translation being that Changeling!Big Mac's belly would be slapping against dat ass, unless Twilight had been laying on her side on the floor as he was pounding into her, practically lying on top of the other pony as a result of their stark difference in size. Just let that image sit in your head and really enjoy it.
ahaha hey Loyal how long are your work shifts ? XD 8 hours ? ... hehehe
thumb up and fav, to bad i allready read it xD
1016290 Flanks are the part between the ribs and the haunches, right? Either way it has been adopted to mean the side of the haunch in the show, what with blank flank and all, so I don't mind anymore. I do believe there's some... inconsistency in horse anatomy there as well, in my native language I often hear people refer to the side of the haunch as "flankene." Not sure what is going on there.
I thought fur was the 'hair' on the pelt?
Anyway, this was pretty good, some instances of hoofs instead of hooves early on, and of course the silly filly remark.
The only thing that bugged me was the sudden mention of G-Spot, it feels a bit clinical, and with the current disputed status it just feels a bit odd.
Always try to avoid clinical terms or measurements. Like never describe the length of a penis in inches, or the size of (human) boobs by bra-size.
This was a pretty good entry for a speedclop! Good job!
you don't like trixie, do you ?! still a pleasure to read
So Trixie's a porn star now? That's a direction I didn't see her going in. (The swearing might have turned me away a little though.)
-SoI
1095441 not Trixie .. her water boy is going to be a new porn star ... thats the REAL bad thing about this story imh(ua)o
wow nice one, the longer the better i think ... the "story" part was very funny ... as the ending hehehehe
How the hell did that become clop... It was just little story about Rarity and wine then BOOM, CLOP!
Came out of nowhere... but for 67 minutes, I guess that's what happens
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I was pressed for time >.>
Rarity really likes cotton comforters.
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Rarity and a herd of sheep... Do it.
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IS THAT A REQUEST?!
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I'm betting that for you, this falls into the "instantly boner inducing" category
a rare vintage?
great chapter Loyal, was fun to watch
oh and for the horn thing , you know >///<, you haven't used lyra yet in the speed clops ...
Bucking HAWT!
And that is how you humiliate someone. I'm assuming, then, all of her friends were in on the joke. Sorry I couldn't stay for you writing the story, internet went out for a while, and I didn't feel like hopping back in when it went back up. I do so love the way you write Rarity, and I hope you do more works with her in the future, no matter the circumstances. I guess Rarity got back at Rainbow for leaving her and Pinkie in the middle of nowhere
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Man, I SO rushed that ending >.< I wish I could have done more with it, but I had 8 minutes left going into Twilight/Rarity
rofl that one was damn nice xD
Anyways, never read your stuff before, but that, that was brilliant.
I think it's clear now.
That's how you make humiliate someone.
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Two of these chapters have Rarity >.>
But I'm glad you enjoyed it
OH WAIT.
NO, I see what you meant.
My bad.
Yeah. I think this would have worked.
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I don't think that's derp, that looks more like desperate, distraught, etc.
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Meeh.
Anyways.
Glad you enjoyed ^.^
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IT!
Enjoy?
ENJOY?!
I LOVED IT!
IT WAS BRILLIANT!
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I really thought she'd get her cutie mark at the end of this...
Sorry...
Epic.... but no climax for me... not the same as the other ones.
that was hot xD
Oh. I remember this. I was there.
Commence read.
Missed about half.
WOW!!! Scoots can put away THE MEAT!
WOW!!! I have to say that I am quite impressed with what you produced within the hour. Though I initially had my worries, where as you were facehoofing immediately Iroh told you what we decided upon for the plot lol
Tartarus help me, I will watch you...
DAT GREECE
Spike ain't paid enough for this shit.
Sad that I was unable to find the perfect image to describe what had to be RD's face when Rarity told her that...
It was delightful being a part of this. I can't say I'm proud, though...
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Not very many Giant Spike stories. Sadly I missed the stream.
Meh, might've been a bit better if he were more appropriately sized to actually have sex but this was cool too. Never really thought of a clop fic like this before
1013379 I can do 3000 words in 50 minutes
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Most recent?
3.4 in 62.
2146742 i do not always count when i write, so i forgot how much it took the last time
Commence read.
That timberwolf. Got wood?
What a
ahahaha the cutie mark joke at the end, great, to bad i wasn't there to watch the show
I'm sorry I had to leave early but it was still fun nevertheless lol
Commence read.
Chippers....