O'Marelly's Bar & Grill

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Fiddlebottoms

Fiddlebottoms #1 · Aug 4th, 2012 · · ·

BEST ELFEN LIED ANNOUNCER VOICE: Though they may, at first glance, seem like endings, all things are just beginnings. An event, then another, and each proceeds in a grim march of brutal, mindless cruelty, as ripples in a pond under the steady fire of a machine gun. Bombarded until, at last, the fish all rise in mortified supplication and the waters run red as the rising sun of a new, more hateful tomorrow.
That's the silly way of saying that more is coming. There's still three surviving members of the party that murdered Scootaloo, after all. And then their families. And their friends. And the families of their friends and the friends of their families.

If I've fucked up in the story (Celestia forgive my blighted soul), please point it out for correction.

iloveportalz0r

iloveportalz0r #2 · Aug 4th, 2012 · · ·

>she squished it's brown contents around
When used possessively, "its" does not have an apostrophe

1027971 It's full of lulz. What more do you need? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png

Fiddlebottoms

Fiddlebottoms #3 · Aug 4th, 2012 · · ·

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You have no idea how much your approval means to me. Like, seriously. "A Fun Day," is up there with "Cupcakes" and "Rainbow Factory" as the holy trinity of MLP Darkfics (Comedy, Pathos, Adventure; respectively).
As for what comes next, this fic spiraled out of control on me, at the moment the plan is 4 parts:

O'Marelly's Bar & Grill (Within/Without) Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy
Piggy (Castrate/Decapitate/Devour) The Apple family
Unicorns in Lust ... FOR BLOOD! (Yellow Bile/Black Bile/Phlegm/Blood) Death of Twilight, Rarity & Fleur
Road to Las Pegasus (.../Sunspots/...) Downfall of Shining Armor + ApplebloomxScootaloo shipping

Obviously, titles and everything else are pending changes and/or death of the author. But, my goal here is to live up to the short description. Everypony dies.

Rask