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Coyote de La Mancha

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This story is a sequel to When All of Your Wishes Are Granted

At Sunrise’s belated welcoming party, Rarity and Applejack share how, after a brief breakup, they were reunited again.

It seems that after a careful analysis of the situation, the Cutie Mark Crusaders determined that the older girls’ personal lives were none of their business. They therefore made the mature decision to leave Applejack and Rarity to resolve their relationship however they saw fit, without interference.

Just kidding. They pretty much set everything on fire.

(Chronology Note: the framing device of this story takes place early in Season Five, but the story told by the characters flashes back to events in Season One.)

Part of the Sunset Rising continuity.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 8 )

Whoo, boy... :facehoof: And I though the CMC learned their lesson after nearly "losing" Big Mac and Cheerilee to a love poison. Those fillies...

“Roar!” yelled the Frumious Bandersnatch,

Shun! Shuuuuun!

I do like how its the sisters' not performing their talents that really gets the Crusaders concerned. Even when they didn't know, their souls did.

Which makes me the perfect chairmare for the day, since it gives us a clear, unbiased, rational approach.

Because if there's any set of adjectives that describe Scootaloo, it's clear, unbiased, and rational.
(Why do you spell her name with a "k," anyway?)

This will end in tears of laughter, I'm sure. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

Ah, but that was trying to force two ponies together. This is trying to mend a broken relationship. Totally different, at least according to Crusader logic.

The flashbacks in this tale take place during Season One, before Rarity came out at the Grand Galloping Gala.

(Why do you spell her name with a "k," anyway?)

Um... I’m... certain there is a clear, unbiased, and rational reason for that... :rainbowderp:

I am glad to see Sunrise and Luna having some time together and Sunrise having fun with the CMC is nice, and maybe they can inspire her to get a cutie mark, since they're the experts =x ( :rainbowderp: though I am curious to their reactions of Sunrise not having one.) Would also like to see Celestia's reaction to her sister dating her former student's doppelganger.

I will confess, I am still mulling over exactly what Celestia’s stance on that will be. :trollestia:

As for the CMC’s reaction to finding out that Sunrise is a blank flank, I suspect their reaction will be a bit more predictable. :scootangel::yay:

"Questing" is certainly one way to describe the Crusade, yes.

Don’t usually see ‘em this time a’year. Not in months with a ‘Y’ in ‘em.

Huh. They hibernate through two months of winter, May, and July? Of course, given the days of the week, assuming month names will be the same is a risky proposition.

The failed plan montage is largely hilarious, though the regretful undercurrent adds some excellent depth. Still funny to imagine the Crusaders slamming two pony toys together and shouting "Kiss already!"

*nods sagely* Rarely seen, the jackalope is both shy and aloof. True sightings are rare, indeed. Fluttershy will be very excited.

Still funny to imagine the Crusaders slamming two pony toys together and shouting "Kiss already!"

Hee! Yes. :rainbowlaugh:

Glad the montage worked for you. Now, the weekdays are gone, and only the weekend remains. And we shall see what happens... :duck::applejackunsure:

The Cutie Mark Crusaders are often hilarious.

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