Ok, looks interesting. And great that you're having fun writing this.

Finally, an intresting displaces fic! Keep it up lad!

9533157 I will endeavor to do so, dear reader.

As long as it doesn’t become a Gary sui I’ll be glad

9536444
Nah I'm not criticizing it I was merely joking and giving my own little opinion on something, truth be told I can't criticize your books because their just to good in my opinion.

9536450 Thank you for the kind words, my dear reader.

9536471
No problem my favorite author

"We teach you all combat," She smirked. "From the ground up."

Okay, one, do they not know about Durin from the prophecy? Or was it just revealing enough to only tell them that the moonlord was coming to fuck their shit up? I hate those kinds of prophecies.......
Secondly, I am already liking this. Let's see where this goes!

9584021 To answer your question, it was extremely vague, and did not describe a hero. The most it said was...

Prepare, for thine doom shall be wrought in four winter's time...

9584459
Hmmmmm...........

So there isn't any prophecised hero, but he's gonna show his face in four years, kick the prophecised doom's ass, and be home in time for dinner? All this after four years of training and preperation, of course.

Please update this story

9630603 I will when I can. Today's schedule is kind of packed, and so is tomorrow's, so Tuesday is the more likely option.

Thanks keep up the great work

9631043 I will endeavor to do so

... more

More please More

9632092 With any luck there will be more on Tuesday. Today, as I have said before, is a rather packed schedule, so tomorrow is the more likely option for updates.

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I'd prefer it if he couldn't do it alone, and needed the help of friends. It would make for a more compelling story, in my opinion.

"It will bide it's time, taking strength from the kills it's ken makes under the light of the moon,"

While I think I understand what you wanted to go for with this sentence, that last bit is wonky. The structure is strange, doesnt seem to fit with the rest of the sentence. Especially ken. Ken means knowledge, or to know. Basically you're saying that they think their enemy is going to use their brain to kill things. Which could be true in a roundabout way, but it's still awkward syntax.

"... taking strength from those it kills under the light of the moon" is much, much more sensible."... from its kills under..." is also perfectly acceptable.

9816704 Good thing he won't be able to alone then, hm?

10156679 Ah, apologies, used the wrong word there.