hey everyone I hope you enjoy my stories i'm gonna warn everyone I do a lot of experimentation with my writing and am actively looking for a beta reader
Faye Winters was a fairly bland girl with average looks. She pretty much kept to herself. Really, the only notable things about her were that she liked My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and that she was stuck in a wheelchair. Then some Force decided she'd be the next gamer and put her in Equestria soon after. She just wants to know who thought this was a good idea.
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The backstory of the Girl is a bit short but besides that? I enjoyed it as a fan of 'the Gamer' in fanfiction. Good luck with this Story
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Well I plan on diving into her back story a bit at a time so I dont just flood the fic with it so thay was people can enjoy it and get snipits of her life that dont inturupt the flow...hopefully on that last part. Im glad you enjoyed it other wise and thank you for the wishes I hope I can make this an enjoyable story to all who like 'the gamer' in fanfiction ^^
I like the flow of this Chapters, but sadly there is not much detail in it like I don't feel anything thanks to the Gamer mind and body and such and I miss a bit of the 'observe' ability.
For example, this is from this Story
Timberwolf. Lv 13
HP: 700
MP: 30
With the souls of deceased pack wolves granting them life, their bodies are comprised of twigs, logs, and leaves. Territorial, and extremely aggressive.
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Oh I see I apologize for that and will try and fix that with future encounters and other things like it, and probably go and fix the observe skill thing I did on this chapter at a later time probably just later today. Im glad the flow is other wise good.
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There is nothing to apologize for. This is your Story and whatever you write is yours to decide.
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.///. Thanks but as a reader of these sort of fic myself I really should have noticed I didnt do that...Though I am still doing this a bit differently than other people when they write them.
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Creativity and originality are, besides the story, the essential elements in every Story. Also, do not be too hard on yourself, everyone was bad when they first started writing, somewhere ok and others started on a level it hurt reading... like me, but as long as you continue writing, you will become better, and that is all that counts.
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Yeah. That's very true.
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Observe is still level one
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I do know that, but that was only an example. Everything and everyone normal could be observed.
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I mentioned it leveled up a couple times in the previous ch...but am i wrong on how it levels?
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dont remember it leveling up
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I didnt bold it since it was only being mentioned I probably shouldve done that now that I think about it welp another thing to keep in mind for the future
This could stand to use a proofreader.
The concept is interesting.
I'm curious how her disability would manifest if she picked seapony. She would be chairbound on land, obviously, but would she be able to swim normally?
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Huh I hadnt thought about that I may have to play with that Idea later...and I do have a beta reader...I am looking for a second one though partlu because of the The gamer aspects in it...Im very new to writing fics like this...
Welp, Neighsay is going to get a Triple blade bash soon.........
You know something I never got is why they don't tell celestia what neighsay just did she probably could have had him thrown in the dungeon and stripped of his positions and titles for insulting and possibly alienating every ally equestria has
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It's so sorely tempting to do so
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Never got that ether completly but if I had to guess Neighsay could probably turn it into a he said she said thing and its not like twilight had been using the recording spell like with a certain pony so without Celestia being there herself, or Luna being there, she couldnt do anything...politics kinda suck on the no proof nothing done front
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You make a good point but at the same time the princesses and equestria as a whole can't ignore it if all their allies were to complain or leave the alliance all together
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True true personally I domt think Thorax would commemt on it since in the cannon version of the episode he did say the changelings were use to that...makes me wish Pharnyx was in the episode more and just a cameo
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Oh, hello Neighsay. Just wanted to introduce you to a friend of mine, in fact, he’s my best friend. ASRIEL DREEMURR you’re gonna have a bad time
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...very tempting oh so very tempting
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Well, you do have a Gamer, what about some “Games?” Or perhaps NPC’s in the shop ID?
*EDIT: That can leave the ID
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Im honestly still debating on how I want her to harm Neighsay and so far.. every Idea put on the table is very good very very good...if not a little more violent than normal mlp...but thats kind of expected here...
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I vote she beats him through brains .... he's obviously using his position for his own agenda .. since she knows what an embassy is since she was human ... she can tell twilight to have each group send a teacher/ambassador and make the embassy where the school is since embassies are considered foreign soil and since it can be authorised by celestia or luna since twilights endorsement could be conflict of interest which could be worked around by having the other leaders request it to the one of them directly bamn ... plus a friendship school should have other species teaching more about their own cultures.
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Trie trie and hmm every violent Idea idea always tempting also why didnt they think of that in the original show?
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Oh I have plans for both of those...dont worry and im trying to not bring in anything too techmologically advanced because it *is* Equestria while it does have some modern things not everu thing about it is (or else Tempest might not have been a huge problem)
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Like I said I have plans
"Ratings Disabled"
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*Gently closing the door and locks it*
''Nope!''
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No one can never not provoke Murphy law because it is an all consuming evil.
Ooooh nice story so far