Fernando1717
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A really sweet little story but there's one major problem, its full of spelling and grammer errors EVERYWHERE. Might wanna look into it and fix it or get an editor.
Other than that it was nice.
Thanks for the comment Zheroxzone, and yes i know. If it wasn't for the auto correct in my cellphone it would be way worse. The fact that english is not my primary language make it even worse. I'm already working on the sequel but like you say if i can get the story edited before submit it I'll do it. Problem is i don't know one.
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Im pretty sure there are groups that focus on help with editing stories, or just ask on the forums if anyone is up for editing, you might get lucky and find someone.
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Thanks man, that will help me a lot. I'm new in this stuff but I want to get better. Thanks again
I do enjoy this ship
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Thanks, is it my favorite, the story Fruits of love is attached to it and it sinks deeper in the relationship with some sex here and there.
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Sorry, I didn't get what you were asking but I hope you liked the story, by the way, this was my very first story so, sorry for the errors and the incoherence, hope you read the continuation. Have a good one.
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Ah, ok, glad to hear it. Hope you like my future works just as much, thanks.