-Warning- If you don't know who Hank is go here
Hank, a well known person in Nevada, has a new mission, involving explosives and a new improbability drive. That, obviously doesn't ends up well. That's why he ends in the magical land of Equestria. Some things are new to him. But his stay may be "problem-less" there.
This is my first fic so constructive criticism helps. Leave a rating, comment and all of that.Unless like all the other Madness-MLP crossovers I read, this one has romance. Guess who will be his target. Taking that off. It was a stupid idea of mine.
I'll add character tags as they appear. Since then, only Main 6.
Sorry if there are major faults and lack of vocabulary in the writing because I'm from South America (Argentina precisely). Grammar corrections are welcome.
Cover art by Rhunyc.
Enjoy! :D
Edit: Switched rating to Teen since there only swearing and almost no gore from my point of view. Maybe I'll switch back to Mature when It get's more... mature. But until then I want people to think this is more than a story about slauthering things.
Hank isn't an OC, he shouldn't be tagged, as he is from another work
This seems interesting... I'd love to read something based off the Madness Combat series... I'm gonna read it later, oh, and there is another epic version of Madness Combat called Xionic Madness made by Xionico. It's just So... AWESOME!
Brohoof! /) OwO (\
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Thanks for the advice!
1114293 Np =P
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Yep. I know I already watched the whole series. It's Awesome!
Brohoof for you too! /) (\
1114331 same =P
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you had me at romance
DEIMOS IS SO FUCKING LEGIT HE CAN LIT A CIGERET WITH HIS THUMB SUCK I TWILIGHT!
hank has awsome ninja skills becuse he's so MLK PRO hank's a legit MLK pro
NEED MORE. Please? Hanks so ninja the grandmaster wishes to be him when he grows up
Picture alone made me thumb this up. But do you mind if you gets pre-reader, there are a lot that would be able to help you out with bigger vernacular, like I could help you if I wasn't already a pre-reader for like 50 people and a writer myself. But again, there are many groups for it, so go and find them.
NEED MOAR
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Thanks dude! your story is awesome too!
1232368 thanks :D
*jealous because yours has more likes*
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Not nagging, just asking
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Soon mein friend. When I find myself with the energy to write it.
Damn that took a LOOOONGG time, will the next chapter be alittle shorter to take?
Goodness me, a Dupdate! :D
Sanford you lazy fool. >:|
THATS SOME FUCKING CRAZY ASS NINJA SKILLS HANK!
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Maybe yes, maybe not. I'm quite lazy :P
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Thanks to you dude. If it wasn't for your comment asking for a new chapter this could have taken longer.
More please?
If not then, I shall send the devil himself to kill you. HAVE FUN!
Well hank being a ninja is getting harder and harder over there apparently
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Yuuup. I plan on making him fail and hit his face a lot. You know... for comedy.
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seems legitdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
I cast a spell of Motivation on you!
I hate being 'that guy')
(Sorry
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I think that'll help.
1541286 Knew it >:D
Nice buddeh :D
Are the gay lovers, S & D going to join Hank in his hell? :P
wall of text!!!!!!!!!!!
DAT BLOCK OF TEXT!!!!
But still a good chapter overall
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First off, they're not gay. Making that clear, well, let's put that as a maybe. It could be a good idea.
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What do you mean? Was that part bad?
1722956 Nonono... XD
I was just joking when I said that.
Don't do it.
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But... Deimos would be cool!
1723067 Sanford :D
He's more serious and likely to "WTF!?"
and i meant i was joking with the 'Gay lovers' thing
1723180 You're right, Sanford would be cooler.
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Space it out a little and your fine
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And you mean?
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The words and make paragraphs. I have made the same error. Doing that means some people will instantly not like it. Trying to help. if you want i could edit it and send you the finished version in a pm
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Hey check out the chapters and tell me if it's well spaced now.
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Much better
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Thanks dude. Constructive criticism always helps.
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Anytime bro
Just 1 error near the beginning
and Hank now talks?! 
well they are humanized in this one duh 
"Ok this must be the town she said." She? Hank must have changed genders
just a spelling mistake 
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I hope it's corrected now.
Hank, you dumbass...
Meh, t'was nothing a duct tape couldn't fix.