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That is good, revisions are part of the process. And it is something we just have to go through sometimes.
Also you are going to need to work on chapter length too. if it's too long the chapter will likely come off as slow a plodding. If it's too short is can be too fast paced.
In general around three to four thousand word will help you to keep your pacing more even. It's not an iron clad solution though. You'll probably have to experiment a little to dial it in all of the way.
This story has potential and I would like to see how it develops.
Two different speaker means two paragraphs. So you'll need a space between them.
Zeko become pony it is?
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He will not become a pony
Not very ‘shinobi-like’ to give away a weakness.
Wolves comes
SHINRA TENSEI!!!