Immediately following LuMe's "Discovery" (A link to Discovery) Rainbow Dash and Rarity now have to figure out who and if they're going to tell about their new relationship. Rarity having only discovered how she feels towards Mares doesn't want to say anything, but Rainbow Dash feels excited and can't wait to tell somepony. Rainbow knows that their friends will accept them no matter what but Rarity refuses to believe it.
This is my first story so please be gentle with the comments everypony.
I wanted to do a sequel to LuMe's story because I loved how accurately he got someone's feelings when they start to discover their sexuality it can be hard and confusing and most of us have trouble telling anyone the way we feel. But no matter what there's someone that will accept you for who you are and I'm talking from experience.
Any feedback positive or negative is welcome as this is my first fic and I'll need as much of it as possible.
-.- it ended there, out of all places you chose there. I need to fav now just so i know what will happen.
And the fact that this is a very good fanfic so far
Very good. I believe in Flutter Dash, but its still amazing
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Hi! I hope you all are enjoying the fic! I am sure that fluttershy<3_66 will do an awesome work!
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holy @$%# a raredash love fic..... I LIKE
here have a pony
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VWAT ISH WRONG WIF U PEOPLE DAE R BOF MARE! NOT DAT IT MATTERSH BUT PONISHE DONT NEED DISH KIND OF DISH!
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1020553I'm basing it off of LeMu's story plus I myself am gay so it's helping me to come out basically
1019040 Definition of a cliffhanger bro trolololo btw your second comment made me smile so much! Thanks for the support!
1020044 Thanks!
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What the hell are you saying, seriously I can't even begin how to decipher that.
1036110 i know i don't mind that u make the ponies lesbian, but, rarity and rainbow jut aren't met for eachother
im not a hater i MLP:FIM i my life, just, i dont reallly like shipfics. o please forgive me, i dont want to sound like a hat8ter
but i was in a bad mood when i posted that, so sorry.
1037402 im not a hater, ponie r my life, and now that u said that i am feeling ver sad, well i hope that u r happy that u ruiend my vacation
1037688 i wasnt trying to make you feel bad man that's what i try to avoid ok just relax no harm was meant either way and lets just forget the whole thing ok?
1037915 ok,
but can you agree, to make no more shipfics, u can add to this 1, but if u write another, i will call mira's storm on u....
but can we just be friends? i dont want to start a hate comment chain on ur fanfic.
1038040 i don't know if I can agree to that but i have no ideas for one right now so we'll see I guess and if i do you don't have to read em lol
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that's right, there are people that enjoy shipfics and there are people that don't. If you don't like it you just don't read it istead of trying to make people feel bad about liking it... There was no 'love and tolerance' in what you did earlier but at least you understood that everyone is different... There are people that preffer adventure, clop/shipfics, grimdark and so on...
So don't worry OctaviaOverture101, everypony's fine
rarity is quick to assume that people dont like them being together
1040846 It's just how i was at first it I know now that most people don't mind it but at first I wouldn't tell a single person
1019229 i love Flutterdash too it's probaly my fav of them all
yay update
DAMN CLIFFHANGER
1074658 blame moster cai :P
1074676 i shall
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nuff said
1074687 no you shall not!
1074713 i hate you so much now lol but this is a exelent chapter to this fanfic, keep it up!
1075037 whanna fight 'bout it
1075050 ok but i wont do the fighting
she will :)
1075065 neither will i
she will
1075150>>1075065 now now no need for a mini flame war lololololo
1075336 lol
1075150 truce?
1075345 yeah
Poor Rarity
Her parents can both go piss up a rope, and the same goes for all the irl parents that abandon their LGBT children and make them feel worthless. What ever happened to unconditional love? 
1080125 That's why I love my parents :) this is like what I felt like would happen when I came out I was so scared
Sweet, though they are two errors I spotted...
"She knew she was supposed she was supposed to be on the weather patrol today but she didn't care somepony else would take care of it she had to stay with Rarity today."
And " 'Stupid ignorant people.' " should be "Stupid ignorant ponies." since this is MLP
That didn't distract from the overall goodness of this chapter though, I just hope the jerkass parents of the year don't try and take Sweetie Belle away.
1099399 Thank you so much I forgot to send the chapter to my prereader before I released it and I just fixed those errors
Thanks again
Rarity's parents dying so soon after the big family falling out seems cliche but I'm not complaining. Another nice update and I can't wait to see how Rainbow and Rarity plan on starting a family
Do i have to remind you every chapter?
1175260 I told you how I was gonna do it I'm going to release it and fix it after
1175275 oh yeah, sorry, i forgot
anyhow, i dident see a cliffhanger so thats good. (germane, this was me when i read that
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1175304 I didn't come up with that just to let the record show
1175308 thats good.
why is there a struggle for gay marrige in equestria? wouldn't what celestia says goes?
1175391 I'm going with she likes to have everypony feel the same something like that and the ponies don't have to treat them equally ya know
Great chapter buddy
1175391 actually I'm going with she doesn't want to just force things on to her subjects
1230197 thanks for answering my question... twice
1230226 I changed my mind
Not sure I like this plot development, Rarity's parents surviving the train crash and spending time with a zebra tribe and coming to their senses in the process comes off as really really cliche
Little Silverheart sounds adorable though and it appears she's already getting into mischief like all little colts and fillies do 
Thanks for using the name
Hello there, this is your friendly neighborhood Grammar Nazi to brighten up your day. Lets take a sentence from the text and fix it, shall we?
Take this, you can obvously see that this is a run-on. Commas are your friend, do not ignore the punctuation. Now, let's cut this into halves and add the commas where they belong.
I'm... better, but I'll get over it, I guess. I'm glad they didn't try to take Sweetie Belle away from me though, that would have pushed me over the edge.
See? With a few commas, periods and added words, the sentence reads much better. When you do your editing, please look for these sentences and stop them before they can happen, you will be surprised how many more people will compliment you on your writing when it has the correct grammar.
I hope this has helped you. Now, I must go on and read the rest of the story to have some fun reading.
The end.