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"I’ve always wanted to rub one out with my friends, and make ourselves squirt around a large bowl."

. . . :facehoof:

Here are their faces. :ajbemused::fluttershbad::pinkiegasp::rainbowwild::raritydespair::twilightoops:

And just because, here is a moustache. :moustache:

My reaction? WAAAAAAAAAT THE FAAAAAAAK

That part with Gummy was hilarious and in my head he immediately had a black voice.:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh: Is that racist?:rainbowhuh: Probably not. Overall I liked this though I had no [REDACTED] cause I [REDACTED] beforehoof.

Also 1st:yay::pinkiehappy: well second now(damn I'm an idiot)

1272898 You know, what I find the most amusing about that line is that yes, it is rather out of context, but it's far from the most "messed up" I've seen in a fanfic. And mine is even meant to be "out there", I've seen more messed up "serious" fics hehe.

1272902 I can totally see that as a legitimate reaction :rainbowlaugh:

1273083 I like Gummy for some reason :raritywink: Maybe cuz one of my friends get so annoyed on him hehe.
And I dunno really what voice I picture for Gummy, he was a running gag this whole story though :twilightsmile:. Anyhow, glad you liked. I see to get about a "50-50" split of people either hating it, or loving it. Or maybe 45-45 with a 10 % people being "eh".

1278959 While this seems to have amused some people, I do think I should stick to my rape and sensual stuff, those seem to be what I am best and, and what people appreciate the most hehe :trollestia:

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Write what makes -YOU- happy, because there isn't a way to please everyone :rainbowkiss: :yay: (i personally think this is one of your best works lol) :eeyup:

1287131 I try to, most of the time heh. (Though I've noticed I am not that good at all in writing my favorite topic, but eh, we'll see where it goes xP) And glad to hear you think that. Personally quite fond of some parts in "what have we learned?" due to it's message :twilightsmile:

Dear Fluttershy Braveheart,
You are a boss.
-Ruins

1343800 Fluttershy Braveheart? xP

Hammerspace, bro, hammerspace.

1426825 I checked that up on tvtropes, I am still confuse xD

1343839 In the fic 'The Many Origins of Scootaloo', Fluttershy's full name is Fluttershy Braveheart. And she's the author of Daring Do.
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I'm terrible at explaining things, but I'll try to explain what hammerspace is. It's basically an infinitely large, hidden space that can be used to hold objects. It's also where a lot of game and cartoon characters hide their props and other generic items.
It's like an constantly accessible Bag of Holding or something.

1429010 Ah, okay I see. And derp, sorry for slow reply. I kerfaffled a bit with with my tabs.

I really like the 'universe' you've set up here. It'd be nice to some more stories take place in it.:moustache:
Seriously, there aren't enough stories that feature female ejaculation like this. I mean, sure it's present in a lot of stories, but it's rarely such a fleshed out or detailed part of the world. I absolutely love it. Unf.:rainbowkiss:

1792627 Heh, thanks. This story was quite random however, an experiment as said. But I have a somewhat "general" universe I use.
And as said, I try to focus my stories on mostly "left out" parts so to speak. So glad to hear you think it turned out neatly. I generally just like to make more "female focused" stories most of the time to balance out all the male ones heh. Got one more squirting based in the work, but will take a bit to complete as I both need to get rid of my Norovirus, and need to get around to getting a reliable proofreader heh.

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>Got one more squirting based in the work
This makes me far happier than I should be.:pinkiehappy: Also, I love the whole female endowment idea you've been running with, it's such a fun idea to play with.

I hope you feel better soon, that Norovirus business sounds miserable. :raritydespair:

1811542 Hehe xP It is mainly based of the "glory hole" revelation some months back. (aka. if a gender had them in Equestria, it would technically be the mares, same for urinals) And well, it is kinda mostly based of myself irl as I am endowed myself hehe. Not sure how applicable it is as I aim for anatomical correction, but so far have been guessing on that they can have some lips behind those folds of theirs xP But yeah, imo, it does "add" a bit more from the otherwise generally used "just some vulva" thing. Like this, they can at least have more "depth" to them so to speak hehe.

Anyhow, the virus seem to be getting better, or well, I am. Not sure how one puts that in a term... but yeah, getting better at least. Got some animations to work with before the holidays that I'll hopefully manage to make, then I'll try to have the gloryhole fic out before the holidays. Or at least new year. (though, with my bad planning skills, I can only hope I get it done on time.)

This was a very interesting read, as you don't see many fics where you can choose your own path! With that being said, I greatly enjoyed this, and while there were some grammar mistakes and some words being left out, this still deserved a thumbs up and a fav.

Oh, and have 5 mustaches! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

And also, would you like me to be your editor? I'd be more than happy to help!:twilightblush:

2498627 Thanks. This was very much a experimental story however. It has quite a bit of grammar, semi-ooc and context issues. But I tried to have it decent with that said. But yeah, glad that you liked it.

And if you'd like to be, I'd be happy if you wanted to. (Also, excuse my current grammar, just got up xP) I got a couple of stories as of now that needs pre-reading. And with that said, if you'd want to ball ideas or have me check up on a thing, I wouldn't mind doing that for you.

6235351 Heh, haven't seen that gif before :P
Ah, I kinda miss writing stupid, random gibberish x3 Even if I somehow always end up doing unique stuff with whatever I do really xD

I have no idea where to put my comment but oh well. I'd like to say that the vernacular used throughout the few chapters that I've read
(I know I know i probably shouldn't say anymore since I haven't read the whole thing yet but I'll forget otherwise, so sorry in advance).
I wanted to say that whilst talking of about their genitals I had a bit of a confusing time until I could confirm that they were indeed females as several terms are usually used hand in hand with males but I suppose it's not limited to just them, that's all. I don't mean to criticize it just wanted to give what a bit of info on what I thought throughout the reading.

P.S. Nice read by the way! I really like the chapter "To Waffles!".

Ok again this is my second comment to go in this story but I can confirm that my last comment was of course not entirely thought out, though with one chapter left I think that I can affirm that the use of vernacular was used fairly well and I easily understood it, so basically my last comment was poopoo and my thoughts of this story are still held in high regard!

6238170 It did eh? :P
Well, it was an experiment as said. I do love to try out new things. (as evident by the fact I've even invented several fetishes, and been the first to do several themes in pony related fics as well xP)


6243439 Well, all technically end up in my "comment pool" so :P
Anyhow, as for the genital part, do know that's simply because there has never been any terms invented for females, thus making it impossible to write without using "unisex" terms. Everything I use however, I make sure it works with female anatomy ;D (I have actually written one where they are "guys with tits" (aka: futa) but that was solely to poke hole at the (basically) #1 issue with that genre xP

So I can definitely understand why you might feel the confusion. But like said: It's literally impossible to write either a dominant female, or graphic sex including a female (without it being straight and only talking about the guy's dick), without using these terms. As otherwise their talk could only be about how tight/tiny and wet they are. There's like, NOTHING else there. So I just as said: Take terms that work for both genders, in order to have SOME action to it :3 Plus, I kinda expect that people should be able to figure out what the terms used mean xP Especially as in basically all cases, they mean exactly what they mean for males, but for a vulva instead of a penis ;P And that's nice to hear.

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