Sunset Shimmer and Rarity have been going out for a while now. Their relationship isn't perfect, but nothing ever is. Lately though, things have been strained. Tonight, Sunset just wants to have a fun night out with her friends, and to ignore her relationship troubles. But ignoring her troubles is really her problem to begin with.
This story was created for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Journeys
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I really liked this! I wish there was a sequel. I didn’t know I liked the sunset rarity parting but know I do!
rarity is strong enough that she could carry sunset home (see friendship games when she held 2 people with 1 arm plus her self with the other) but cute story loved it
That's pretty great. :D
I really enjoyed it but twice in a paragraph towards the end you used "you're" instead of "your". Now I'm not a grammar nazi but this kind of easily avoidable grammatical mistake can take you out of a story.
Apart from that I really liked it! Good job!