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Dreadnought


There is nothing as liberating, or terrifying, as a blank page.

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After a life-altering event, Equestria will never be the same. Friendships tested...hearts broken...lives changed forever.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 18 )

9173986
I hope you liked the twist!

Dreadnought

Damn. That almost got confusing in the middle.

9195632
I hope it wasn't too confusing. I worked hard to make it straightforward... well as straightforward as the twists will allow.

Dreadnought

I have to say, the alternate Fluttershy had me laughing my plot off. Well done with that. I really want to see how the other characters are reacting to the parallel world.

9201480
Well, it's always nice to get feedback on my stories. I like to know if readers enjoy my work - not only so I can improve as a writer but also so that I can continue making stories that readers want.

In regards to Fluttershy, you might remember she made an appearance before:
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9202625
Yeah, I kind of thought that was the inspiration for making the alternate Fluttershy like that. So, WILL we see how the other characters are adjusting to the parallel world? I'm sure Fluttershy waking up in a Manehattten apartment will be interesting.

9202651

That being said, I plan on exploring how these characters deal with their current situation.:raritywink:

Dreadnought

Derpy's a Wonderbolt in the AU. Great, now I wanna see a story ft. Dash and Derpy in Academy together.

9213949
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IT'S MUFFINS!!! IT'S MUFFINS!!! Why does everypony call me Derpy!!!

9214098
Sorry, sweetie. Once you get a nickname everyone likes, they're not gonna stop calling you that, no matter your protests.

9214116
IT'S SILVER BELLE!!! IT'S SILVER BELLE!!!:pinkiehappy:

Sorry, I couldn't find a good image of Sweetie as a colt.

9214149
You know you're in an alternate universe right?

9214157
Actually, this story takes place in the prime universe with alternate universe characters. I hope it was clear to readers.

9214170
No, I was "talking" to Silver Belle. What's alternate to us, is normal for him.

9214170
After finally reading it and from what I quote as your reply.

Does this mean a-la DCTV Arrowverse style things may be going on here?

Aaron.

Good to have this story moving again and nice chapter, uh declaring war on everyone to achieve peace, a story about that would be fun specially if the wars were goofy like in that alternative timeline were Sombra invaded Equestria.

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