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The Robinsons were an ordinary family that lived up in a small town in the Wyoming Rockies. Their three kids always wanted a puppy to play with, being how young they are, but there weren't any pet stores within their reach. But all that had changed around June 30, 2000, when a new pet store had opened right in their town, and they went bananas for the new puppy.

But the dog wasn't anything in their expectations. Like the lavender fur she has, or the pair of wings resting on her back, or the unicorn horn protruding from her forehead, or the magenta star that is present on both of her flanks. Heck, she's even able to speak, for crying out loud. Follow Twilight as she ventures to the home of her new host "family" in a new body, on a new planet, and goodness gracious knows how far from Equestria is she? Find out here.

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Comments ( 28 )

I like the story can't wait for more

Your short description has Wyoming spelled ‘Whyoming’. As a Wyomingite, I find that slightly irritating.

TTwilight gets a Puppy
A baby dragon wasn't the only thing Twilight gained during her acceptance test.
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9158606
... what does that have to do with anything?

9158843
Ah, i only read the title. That's what i immediately thought of.:twilightsheepish:

Twilight + Puppy = my favourite type of fanfiction.

Ahem: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/403990/lycanthropy

And transformation stories in general: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/414583/new-host

And yes, Puppy Twilight WILL return, in an exciting new adventure!

9159084
On a side note, read that, by the way.

9159142
Have, and waiting to see what happens to Discord w/out the maze plot point... because Spike caught Discord's red herring

9159201
So what do you think of this so far?

9160089
So far, so good! please continue!!!!!!!!!! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 5/5

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What's your honest opinion on this chapter?

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Twilight began climbing up the edges of the couch, about to get up to the top when she suddenly slipped and fell on her belly. "I'm gonna...

add the green, overall a good chapter, though what’s the latest Ninetndo console, as a point of reference for time periods.

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Yes as in the time period reference.

9158603
I don't know Whyoming it would. :trollestia:

This is good, but it a bit weird how everyone is taking this so calmly..

Im enjoying the premise so far. Keep up the good effort.

As far as feedback goes (if youd like to improve things going forward, up to you of course), some of the thoughts within the same paragraph jump around a bit suddenly, like youre skipping time without notice. Some moments feel out of character, like twilight's curiosity at their games but no indication of her thoughts while observing or asking the kids questions, or like her acceptance of a new name without too much protest.

Either way, please keep it up and youll show us what's going to happen to this little pet!

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Yeah, More! Maybe Twilight to learn to read, see what stuff she could get and back to her genius self.

What do you mean by that?

And try to play those games?

That could be something to do.

See what could do with science things and technology.

See what she can do with science and tech? Little doggy paws won't help.

Practice her magic.

She would probably have to do that all over again.

9405762
ill keep an eye on this story... its interesting

9405762
also any chance of an update soon?

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Might do a timeskip.

Dogs don't use litter boxes. Cats do. Dogs don't.

Star wars is better. Joking asides will twi sniff some butts.

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