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Very interesting. Did you see the trailer for Devil May Cry 5 from this year's E3?
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Yeah. Got me real hyped.
Hmm. This is getting interesting, wonder how this will go? (not an actual question)
And with that, the fun begins
Aihht, pacing is okay, not all that many grammatical errors save for something inconsequential. I await to see the result of this potential, both character and storywise.
I hope this doesn't die devil may cry is in my opinion the best in the demonic department great job
I first thought that this was a Lucifer related story but ok
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With that title, I can't really blame you
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What do you mean?
Oh ho! The epic power of Octavia ready to hunt demons, now you got my interest. Hopefully she can be up to the levels with Dante in this universe.
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Which part?
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Honestly all I understood was that you like DMC
I’m not a big DMC fan but I want to see where this goes. Also Octy has bayonet for days and I have no idea where she keeps them
i was listening to this when i found this XD
hey ds it's hell drake gotta say this story is amazing but I can't really give more details as this chapter was all about introducing the main character.
Where Dante is introduced could use some work, mainly attention to the details around him. I know he's in a park, but is it a forested park? Or is it grassy? Does it have a pond? Also, maybe describe Dante/David before he looks himself over, that way it makes more sense in a cinematic way. Since this story is third person, or at this point is, we should see characters before they see themselves, hence describe him before he examines himself.
Geez, talk about jarring, being transported to a new world and told your a video game character right off the bat wouldn't bode well with a person's psyche. Anyways good story so far with decent dialogue
Pretty good so far, keep up the good work, can't wait to see where this will go!
I like this, wonder what'll happen next? Well I'll wait and find out!
Oh shit. Noah you cheeky chaotic bitch.
great chapter
Well shit...
And just when he thought he could get a break. Man, David's not having a good day so far
One of the many misgivings of being a Displaced: getting mistaken for soemthing you didn’t do. Somehow David’s gonna learn how bad things are gonna get.
Looks good so far! I love DmC, and seeing a human in Equestria as Dante is just plain out fun. Noah seems like an interesting character, but it makes me wonder just what her story is. Hopefully her backstory is explained later. I do wonder though, since Octavia is likely a demon hunter, where did she learn to fight where she considers Scarecrows a non problem for her? Can't wait to find out!
Babs! Glad to see a familiar face, though the second familiar face seems like she will be a problem. Glad that Noah was telling the truth about his abilities, since that would have ended in a very painful death otherwise. Good fight scene, solid pacing so far! Can't wait to see who this 'mystery' mare is, lol
Oof, Tavi has some mooooooves! Where did she learn to fight like that? Glad that David didn't try to attack her back, because that definitely would have made this situation a lot more complicated, but it's nice to see her giving him the benefit of the doubt and not just trying to kill him. Makes me wonder what kind of moves Vinyl has, since Tavi implies she can fight almost as well or better than her. It's getting interesting, and I'm looking forward to future chapters!
Mmmm just like meeting lady... great. Wonder there would involve bullet to the head or this case stab in the heart.
David got the typical displaced charm.....get place as a villain due to unknown origins. Note AU concept of some native characters getting some way training or powers to counter the changes, seems decent.
great chapter
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Really?
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yeah, i don't lie about what i think is good
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Then why do you think it's good?
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dude's a non-broken badass, the character's personalities are true to the source, and because I just like it.
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I don't understand the second statement. Meaning I'm not sure if it's actually accurate
To be honest I never play dmc4 only the first 3 and the horrible dmc one with black haired dante . Anyways good start a little slow on it but hopefully that will pick up later. I like the fact that Octavia and vinyl are devil hunters as well. Wait what season are u putting this in?
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Around S1 I believe
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Oh ok cool
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Not like it really matters. Most episodes won't be seen in this story.
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Ah so is he going to get other weapons like dante does in the games when defeating bosses or is he only going to have is original starting 3
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The first one. He'll fight demon bosses eventually and get more Devil Arms and styles.
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Ok is it just dmc 4 or other dmc game weapons are the other dmc creatures like the sin reapers and puppets there too
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Any DMC weapon, so long as I figure out how and when to put them or the demon boss that becomes them. As for the enemies, I'd say yeah, though not sure about the puppets. Anymore questions
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Puppets if I remembe are from dmc1 or 2 reapers r from 3. Isnt Noah a Male name?
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I only seen Puppets in 1. I know what the enemies are, just meant that I'm unsure you'll see Puppets in this. As for Noah, yes. Originally Noah was supposed to be my own Displacer who's a rather generous man. But when I told the idea to Parasite, he offered to use a Displacer he made. And I think he said that the name Noah can be used for both genders.
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Ok I didnt know that
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Anymore questions
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Not that I can think of atm
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K. So do you like the story?
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I do there r some hit or misses with displacing stories but u did well