Returning, well, it’s going to be interesting. It’s been over a year since I had been back. Walking on two legs is going to be trippy for a couple minutes.
Fluttershy is coming with me, too. I’m sure she’ll have fun as well. As long as she doesn’t panic like Twilight did her first time through.
Continuity: E616
Great start, has my attention for sure!
in the description
Is this a typo or does it just look like one?
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Shhhh! You saw nothing!
But yeah, typo.
Okay, I’m curious. Let’s see where this goes...
Your grammar needs cleaning up.
Frack it. I'm tracking.
this... has my full attention
Gaian Fluttershy must be an actual vampire.
I do like that look on Fluttershy it somehow It just fits
Please
don't let this fic be dead. It has a great feel to it it needs to be finished. Because I have yet to find any other flutterbatxsunset fics on here.
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Don’t worry. Life just got busy for a few. I’ll be working on this soon.
Well, at least she didn't start sucking blood. I had thought that the portal might have made Flutterbat into a vampire, rather than a vampire fruit bat. Tbh, I kind of wish it had. I'd love to 'see' Rover get sucked dry.
Aww, that ending was pure cute
she has more control than they realized.
Like a boss.
They all learned an important lesson that day. Never question Pinkie Pie. Ever
First of all, great work! I really enjoyed it
but I have to say, that
Mares are smaller than stallions in Equestria too.
and
You forgot a ". Not that that would be a problem, just some things I noticed
and I think Discord taught her "The Art of Trolling"
Hng, the overwhelming cuteness of that ending consumes me!!!
Nice bit of fluff ending.
This was a sweet tale.
I gladly look forward to seeing more of this universe stories.
Will there be stories showing Sunset and Fluttershy dealing with her batform? Will there be more stories of Twilight and Luna. Or stories showing how the eqg cast got together? Or more of Tabula? I can't wait!!
I don't suppose there's going to be a story about the wedding? Maybe have it happen on a night where there's a full moon so that it is more emotionally powerful since sunset would be marrying Fluttershy under the same conditions she proposed. Don't know how I missed this considering it is part of the red and gold saga.
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I have plans to do so. I’m just wrapped up with trying to survive the pandemic and finish a story that I’ve been working on in my main continuity, Homecoming. There is a bit more Red and Gold related story in Tabula Rasa, with a focus on Twi and Luna, if interested though.
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Thanks, I'll be sure to read it.
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Almost forgot this one.
Star of Night: Fluttershy and Sunset from The Day of Love
Wasn't expecting princess twilight to join them, nor pony fluttershy have some gothic like appearance in regards to her outfit. 🙄
Not surprised rarity would have something to say on pony fluttershy' appearance. Should of figured she'd not want to ignore it.
I feel bad for what happened to princess twilight but at least flutterbat saved her.
For a short story it wasn't half bad.