Trouble is by no means an unexpected variable, especially today of all days. Leaders from multiple nations are gathered in Canterlot, specifically for discussing the balance of military influence.
With so many VIP's, its only natural for a wannabe conquerer to challenge such forces. As for one self-proclaiming overlord, 'Tainted Heart' seeks to unleash pure catastrophe. Sure his only experience is bullying small creatures, drowning his sister's favorite stuffed zebra, and graffiti, but that won't stop the primordial resurrection!
Though maybe he ought take change into account. People often experience trauma, so in time they're completely unrecognizable.
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I am going to point this out but the formatting in this story is horrible. It looks like when you ported it over it all went to heck. You have paragraphs in the middle of sentences it just makes the whole thing completely unreadable.
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Any better?
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It hasn't for me. I did a check by using the quote ability in the bookmark ability. When I did that the formatting was correct. It must be something in the site coding that is throwing it off.
Otherwise this was an interesting idea you had in this story.
It seems interesting, but I have to second the formatting issues - there's a lot of weird line breaks that make it hard to read.