Fallout Equestria: The Gates of Tartarus

An ancient and mythical prison, where the worst entities to ever threaten Equestria have been sealed away for millennia. No record remains of what happened there on that fateful day the balefire bombs dropped. This is the story of the Tartarus Facility and one of its Wardens who there, two hundred years ago...

Written as part of a writing prompt in the Fallout Equestria group.

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Osiris Prime

Osiris Prime #1 · Sep 1st, 2018 · · ·

This is pretty awesome so far.

Only 2 or 3 parts? Dang.

This is the first FoE story I've read which is starting AT the apocalypse, and in a pretty secure location no less. Admittedly, I haven't been actively reading through all the stories in FoE groups or anything, but still, it's interesting to me.

The ARCUS system sounds pretty dope. And revolutionary too. If you could turn every soldier into a proficient unicorn, then man, that would have been a game changer for the war, or for the Wasteland in general. Hell, even if you're already a unicorn, it can let you cast spells you normally wouldn't have access to. Could you use telekinesis with it too?

Anyway, I liked it. Very interesting concept and immaculately executed.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #2 · Sep 1st, 2018 · · ·

Does Tirek appear in this story?

thatguyvex

thatguyvex #3 · Sep 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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Glad you like it. Yeah, the one or two more chapters is mostly because I envisioned this as a fairly short story dealing with the day the bombs hit and the Tartarus Facility gets messed up, and how the Wardens deal with it. Basically explaining why there aren't monsters like Tirek running around the Fallout Equestria setting. I might one day expand on this story beyond this point, but I got other projects to finish before that.

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Well, if you do want to know I was planning for him to essentially cameo at the end of the story.

Doomande