When Twilight starts promoting her studies of a distant culture known as 'Pet Culture', some ponies in Ponyville start to take an interest. Ponies like Rarity, who's got her eye on a Pet Sweetie Belle - even if Sweetie Belle herself isn't so sure.
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great story! I hope there's a sequel
9241983
Do you?
9241983
You...you do realize that the PoV changes between them every so often right?
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When your entire arguement can be boiled down to "the author wasn't even trying to put any plot there", based on how much plot you were seeing them manage to put there, you end up being somewhat...Insulting, for a lack of a better term.
Man I really wanna see a sequel to this, or maybe an anthology series with all the different ponyvile residents
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Or the training of the other two cmc
I would love to see the training process of Apple Bloom and Scootaloo as spinoffs
... Or Diamond Tiara
The sad part is what happens when Sweetie Belle grows up? Or the other foals? Your going to see a very messed up society as a entire generation or three will literally be unable to care for themselves.
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Do you need a link to pornhub? There's a few million videos there. Go and talk about how simple their plots are. Say how the plumber is doing a poor job fixing the sink. Or the pizza is cold.
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True, you read it for the Plot, not the plot
Hentai.
i would love to see a sequel
It's... Okay.
I definitely cannot say it's an enjoyable read, but I can't say it isnt either.
My issues stems from a lack of Pacing and development. The writing is great, the plot is interesting (I was actually hooked by the first chapter) but once it actually got to it, I started skimming. A lot, actually. At first I felt I was being unfair, so I went back but I just couldn't get immersed.
Again, it's not bad, it's just not great either. Sadly it's just fetish porn, but I really wish it was more. I feel like it could have been better. Regardless, Ill give it a 2*/5*. No review for this one, I couldnt read enough of it to give it a fair review.