making the world a crazier place, one thought at a time
Whenever Applejack gets near Rarity she feels that something comes over her,
she gets more and more nervous the more she speaks to her,
her heart starts racing when she looks at her. As she trys to explain her feelings to others, something goes horribly wrong.
And now the blonde young woman must find a way to either get out of this mess or clean things up, but she can’t decide what to do.
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Liking it so far hope you decide to continue with this story
9150427
I definitly plan on doing so, but right now I still need to think about in what direction I want the story to go
Drat, wrong Apple and wrong Diamond.
Still cute though.
Oh about the colour option for text its a good idea, but I'm not sure if it works, I usually skip normal text by accident and move straight to dialogue and the colours really don't help combat that bad habit, but it is creative and makes it clear who is talking
Clunky, cliché, cheap colour gimmicks... a promising new writer with a lot to learn and a great hobby to have.
From the synopsis: "...her hearts starts racing when she looks at her..." TIMELORD CONFIRMED!
(wait... we seriously don't have a Dr. Hooves emoji?)
9150451 Can't tell that story because we're in the world of oddly-coloured humans.
what's going to happen?!
WE NEED MORE CHAPTER!!! pretty please? :]
Didn't this story used to be longer?
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well, yes the first Chapter was. But I just did not have enough Ideas for the second chapter to make it to 3000 words like Chapter 1 . And I didn't want to let people wait more than they already have.