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First impression, so far so good. What happens next?
Someone mentioned this in the comments on the Adam Trailer about playing one of Vergil's themes during the video. The UMVC3 version, I believe.
Not bad. Nice touch with the eyes by the way. though i think i should point out that you made it so he is not nearly as strong as the original. at the start of volume 4 ruby was strong enough to one shot a never more. Adum is a great deal stronger than her still.
Ohhh so many to chose from. Oh who cares I do them all.
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Two things. Experience and will
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I can agree with that.
that was a good plan
LOL
Your character is a bit of a Gary Stu so far.
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Not really, he used the abilities at his disposal in a smart way, plus it took almost all of twilight's magic for him to kill the last one and I doubt that they can use that for every fight
Adam: Omae wa mou shindeiru
Deathstalker: Nani!
He can't read minds, can he?
Because*Deep breath*HOW IS THIS-
‘What is going on with this guy?’ Twilight and Rainbow think in unison.
-EVEN POSSIBLE?!
There's also a lot of other errors,but this one bothered me the most of them all.
But other than that, the fic is ok.
7/10
I had to time this perfectly. As the Deathstalker cleared the last block between us, it decided to crunch me by jumping onto me. Time seemed to slow for all that were watching.
Then in an instant, I pull Wilt out of Blush and slash through the beast, straight down the center. The Grimm’s momentum was reversed, it beginning to fall the other direction and as it does it begins to rapidly disintegrate, not into smoke, but into red and black flower pedals which begin to circle me
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https://youtu.be/ImKCt7BD4U4?t=243
I am liking this so far, and so far so good on him not turning into a fuckin prick like he is in the series. Hopefully it stays that way, because displaced stories where they become evil simply because "hurr durr my character is evil, so I will be too" and just throwing away all semblance of their morality are just fucking awful.