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Rarity's confession

Rarity has been keeping a deep, dark secret from Twilight for years. Today is the day she decides to reveal it. Can you guess what it will be based on the character tags?

This is a short comedy story based on a funny idea I got from the "Them's Fightin' Words" panel at BronyCon 2018. I thought it would be clever to use it as a submission for the writing contest.

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Jphyper

Jphyper #1 · Nov 29th, 2018 · · ·

Well, that went nowhere. It's not terrible, but it just didn't go anywhere. All you did was set up a scenario; you didn't give any payoff. Where are all the wacky shenanigans Rarity goes through to convince Twilight? What kinds of increasingly implausible excuses are used by Twilight to explain away said shenanigans?