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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Takes place after the events of "The Return of Tempest Shadow", slight spoilers for those who haven't read the comics.)

Since the Storm King's defeat Tempest (a.k.a Fizzlepop Berrytwist) has worked to change her image and make amends for her troubled past.

But in order to do so she must apologize to Glitter Drops for being so hard on her, something that is easier said than done.

However, it seems Glitter has some suggestions for her friend, not only about how they can mend their friendship but also how Tempest can (hopefully) find a purpose for herself.

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Great story. I would love to read more of this.

Tempest Shadow has yet to meet Flurry Heart.

Comment posted by superfun deleted Sep 3rd, 2018

Honestly, I felt this would have worked if it were part of a larger story, or at least drawn out more. I'm sorry, the amending fences and then going to Prince Shining Armor bit feels like it all happened too fast.

9148742 Sounds like an idea for a sequel, perhaps she could even get stuck with babysitting detail.

The weirdest thing about this fic, and any potential sequels, is seeing Tempest referred to by her real name.

Something about it just bugs me, even though there's nothing necessarily WRONG with it.

Otherwise, this was nice and sweet.

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Yeah, I know, Cute as it is, Fizzlepop (And an apparent homage to a G3 character of all things) just doesn't sound right really. No, I think more often than not to refer to Tempest as Tempest. That's who she is now.

I wanted more fanfics of tempest and her friends since that comic came out but I only found this and one other though the other one is is kinda au

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